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The World!...... Every otakus bible words ๐
Yes? What is it? ๐
i counted 3 seconds! Is that thrilling?
Mmmm *nods*๐ wise words my friend .
Wtf! Final fantasy Leviathan?
nice one!๐ arm not arms๐
You know it is so right that when I read that I just nodded at the thought as it was normal and continued reading. ๐
Hydrogen Bomb!
Am I the only one that had read Moonwalk and thought Michael Jackson? ๐
The real Mc is the sword grandmaster mother of the Mc that has a harem of the best girls like Yasaka in 10 minutes and is a real Alpha. The Mc even though he has golden finger is a beta that needs 40+ chapters to get Rossweisse even when she is desperate for a man and with 2 lifetimes of sword art knowledge he loses from his mother.
Dood you wrote that Miliuki was a toddler before he trained with his many-times-Grandfather so he should be 4,5 at least
Vongole?
-short black hairstyle as David Beckham... Which one ?
GOLDFISH'S MEMORY
Look Author, your idea is great nice how it goes, some misspelling but nothing great to Hurt it. The worst you do are 2 things that if you fix you should really makes it a better work. First: CHILDREN ARE REALLY REALLY STUPID THEY DO NOT THINK LIKE ADULTS DONT BLUSH AND THEY ONLY THINK POOP OR SOMETHING!๐ Second: DO YOU HAVE A GOLDFISH'S MEMORY OR SOMETHING? IN BETWEEN 20 WORDS YOU MAKE THE M.C. 4 Y.O. AND 6 Y.O. OR A TIER 1-5 TO 1-4. That's it as readers we can't expect anything from the Authors but at least don't make mistakes about your own story at least and the he/she him/her because it makes story really painfull to read, that's it good luck. ๐
Look Author, your idea is great nice how it goes, some misspelling but nothing great to Hurt it. The worst you do are 2 things that if you fix you should really makes it a better work. First: CHILDREN ARE REALLY REALLY STUPID THEY DO NOT THINK LIKE ADULTS DONT BLUSH AND THEY ONLY THINK POOP OR SOMETHING!๐ Second: DO YOU HAVE A GOLDFISH'S MEMORY OR SOMETHING? IN BETWEEN 20 WORDS YOU MAKE THE M.C. 4 Y.O. AND 6 Y.O. OR A TIER 1-5 TO 1-4. That's it as readers we can't expect anything from the Authors but at least don't make mistakes about your own story at least and the he/she him/her because it makes story really painfull to read, that's it good luck. ๐
Hey Author! What do you smoke?
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