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I think I've read more light novels than I have braincells. * Mr_Whimsy (old name)
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"despite intent being a major factor", did you miss this part of the comment? Whilst not as in-detail as your comment, it should at least have conveyed that I understood how important intent is for spell casting. Saying that, why did you respond with a comment explaining the intents needed for the Unforgivables?
Did you give that response, using example, to assist readers in better understanding the Unforgivables, or for a different reason?
Not going to copy the Dovazhul on the Word Wall? Thanks for the chapter.
What about their capabilities when it comes to Healing Undead spells? is that considered in the "practically nonexistent" category? Thanks for the chapter.
Parseltongue is a language to "Charm" snakes with intelligence, like what Charm spells do? Cool. Thanks for the chapter.
define what you mean by a "bit too technical". thanks for the chapter.
How in-depth does the potion work in this fanfic? Is it down to the genetic level? Or purely just appearances. Thanks for the chapter.
Author, you spend too much time taking the magic away from Magic. Thanks for the chapter.
However, if you are looking for opinions then stick to your current method; or do both, just a suggestion. Thanks for the chapter.
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As a suggestion for multiple options, like this, you could place them in the comment section of the chapter and go by the amount of likes they get. Thanks for the chapter.
Don't give his the original "cheats" of Huo, but make up your own. Thanks for the chapter.
* her adoptive -> his adoptive
* her adoptive -> his adoptive (only applies if "Yu Haochen" is male)
* her adoptive -> his adoptive
Instead of smallest you can use pettiest. Petty (pettiest) meaning: of little importance; trivial.
* Her shoulder-length -> His shoulder-length
Is the author altering how magic works within Harry Potter? Thanks for the chapter.
It's reached a point where I'm preferring the original Gilderoy Lockhart over this one. Thanks for the chapter.
The Don Rabbit from Shangri-la Frontier (anime)? Thanks for the chapter.