Reviews of A Dreamer's Journey

Please leave a comment on anything you think could be improved. be its writing style, grammar, story direction, chapter-length or pacing. This is the first thing I have written (typed out) since secondary education English years ago.

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I found that introduction a bit comical and a little short too, but as it is said, it is just an introduction. In general, the novel presents a concept that is worth following. Good luck!

great story, love the detail and grammar. and just a all round banging read. wfrferffvdfsvsdfvbvbbsdfbrgsfdbfgstbn fvdgb vcfgb vfbfvbghbfvdfv

Here's a 5-star initial review as support for the author. This one will be subject to changes after the story is complete. So far, the author needs to improve on the use of commas and maximize his chapters with at least 1,000 words. Kudos for having the courage to write this one!

This book is most definitely a must-read. The meat of the text is definitely there; from the setting to the characters and the plotline. The dialogue and paragraphs are grammar-wise. Goodjob! 👍

I mean it when I say, that the writing is truly beautiful, if it wasn't for the modern themes and dark souls, I would say that this is a novel from the early 1900. I already love how the character f drake is built up. I am seriously waiting for any new chapters that may come

I think some action is waiting for we readers there. I like how you described the world background. the story is developing really good as i can say. Just the start so couldn't grasp much but i think as the story continues it will be clear. Myself a beginner so cannot point much :) But keep writing

Havent plyed the dark spuls game but ive heard good thing s about them I really liked the law and world building you had. it was a good read.

Honestly was really surprised at the quality of this fan-fic, I'm embarrassed to admit that I thought it was League or Dota up until the 3rd chapter. But the fact that the story was so interesting that it compelled me to finish it even if I wasn't fully understanding the context, I haven't played the Dark Souls games (although I know some lore about them). Really high quality and a great read that puts my half-hearted fan-fic to shame.

Natural writing style, pretty language, fun concept. There are a few small mistakes littered throughout but they don't detract from the reading experience and who can say their work is perfect, anyways? Not me! There's not a whole lot here currently but what does exist is really fun. I've added this to my library and am looking forward to more.

I like Soulsborne, thus I like this too. Grammar has minimal errors. Dialogue and prose also feels natural and organic. Over all, very good. Kenp on writing.👍

Absolutely love dark souls and world crossing, just a thought but you could have some sort of system with morpheus divinity like remnants of himself lives inside the orb

First time reviewing, seems like a cool concept always been a big fan of the souls series. Noticed you specifically mentioned the third game not thinking of covering any of the previous games?

I'm attracted to this story only by reading the synopsis. Overall this is a good book. I hope the author continues it. Well, I think I don't have any complain about this book.