Review Detail of QuidSevilla in A Dreamer's Journey
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Here's a 5-star initial review as support for the author. This one will be subject to changes after the story is complete. So far, the author needs to improve on the use of commas and maximize his chapters with at least 1,000 words. Kudos for having the courage to write this one!
A Dreamer's Journey
TheDevilYouKnow
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Thanks, once I finish the dark soul's portion I plan on going back over the whole thing fleshing it out and giving it a final bit of editing, the plot isn't really planned out, I kinda just sit down and make it up while I write, I will probably be fusing some of the shorter chapters into a single bigger whole it averages out as 1000 words per chapter already even with the really short intro but there are several chapters with less than 800 words.