Very interesting story, not many errors from what I could tell. The mc is really well developed and the direction of the story seems really good. Keep up the good work
One of the funniest novels I've looked at in a while, and it's a pretty interesting take on a saturated genre. I love the comedy, I just like to imagine walking into this guy's house and seeing hundreds of dakimakuras lining the wall. There are some grammer mistakes, but the writing more than makes up for that
Well, you're doing very good. It's really impressive that your writing in a different language, so I guess I can't really critique too much. Very good novel none the less
Nice beginning and interesting presentation, I like the implementations of different races, even if I'm not really into werewolf novels. A few grammar mistakes, but not ones I really noticed. Pretty good story
The beginning is really intriguing, I didn't know how the main character was going to develop, but he's pretty interesting so far. No real mistakes that I could find, although some of the detailing at the start was toeing the line of enough and too much. The story is interesting, I'm not one to delve into horror or this type of genre, but it is very intriguing and I can appreciate where the author is taking it. Keep up the good work!