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Supersam362

Supersam362

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2020-03-05 JoinedGlobal
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    I really like the character's, they're well written and the interactions are interesting. Although there's a little too much gore for my taste. There's only a few chapters so far, but I can tell this story has potential. Keep up the good work

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    The Devil Under The Name Of God
    Fantasy ¡ 1AM
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    The writing quality of the book is very well developed. I really enjoyed the somber undertone the story gave, reminiscent of the grim dark fantasy genre. The development is fantastic and I can't wait for more, keep up the updates author

    altalt
    Droppedhhh
    Fantasy ¡ ScarletCore
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Commented

    No, I plan to pick it up at some point. I'm getting ready for college, so writing isn't my biggest priority at the moment. Although, I really would like to keep going with it soon.

    Ch 46 Infiltrated
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    The Paladin Order Reformed
    Fantasy ¡ Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    The begining is slow, but when you think it's going to normal, it sprinkles a little bit of foreshadowing to keep you interested. The writing is really well done and the descriptions are great. I can't wait to see what will happen! Good job author!

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    Izuka
    Fantasy ¡ Anotoki
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    I enjoyed reading this story, it's really good so far and the premise is very interesting. I already added it to my library and I plan to read all of it when I get the chance. Some of the grammar is out of place, but it still intrigues me nonetheless. The last thing I want to say is that what I've read is amazing so far and I look forward to reading more in the future. Thank you, author!!

    altalt
    Scarlette Overland
    Fantasy ¡ empressblackrose09
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Replied to Slan

    Yeah, he is.

    Ch 4 Mutual Understanding
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    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    Anime & Comics ¡ Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Replied to LPummill3

    A little creative liberty, I like to think receiving a god's power for the first time would hurt. Although, I could be wrong.

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    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    Anime & Comics ¡ Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Commented

    Wow, I really like the start of this!!

    Ch 1 The Woman In Black Hooded Cloak
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    Scarlette Overland
    Fantasy ¡ empressblackrose09
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    The story has a really good premise and I like how the world building is done over time. There are a few mistakes, but I don't think anyone wants people to critique their first work too seriously. Good job author and keep up the updates!

    altalt
    Cycle Of Nirvana
    Fantasy ¡ Uragos
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    The story is really well written, it's captivating and easy to read. The only thing I can comment on is the lack of comma's where there needs to be some. Other than that the story is really well written and I enjoyed it thoroughly.

    altalt
    The Isle of Guardians
    Fantasy ¡ d_nmalory
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    I like they way the story starts off, it's mysterious and intriguing. I will say the jumping from different view points at the beginning did throw me off slightly, but that's a minor personal preference. Good job author, keep it up!

    altalt
    Snow Flames
    Realistic ¡ The_Paintrogrammer
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Replied to empressblackrose09

    Thank you for your support! I actually have an original novel, it's 47 chapters and a fantasy novel. I started it last year, so I can't say the quality is better, but if you want to help support my original works, then I'd really recommend reading my other novel. It's called the Paladin Order Reformed

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    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    Anime & Comics ¡ Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    I found the story pretty interesting, the only thing I had issue with was understanding the setting at first. I was able to understand with context clues. This is just a small critique and I found the over all story pretty good. Keep writing author

    altalt
    The Wings Home
    Fantasy ¡ inklingparker
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    I don't usually give 5 stars, but I truly believe this novel deserves it. I don't know if the story is modeled after the manga Re:Monster (an amazing fantasy manga if you're looking for one), but it closely resembles it in several aspects. The goblin pov, leveling up through consuming enemies, etc. While there are many similarities, I would be hesitant to say it's the same. The story is extremely well written and very interesting to read. I had no problem staying invested and made sure to add this story to my library. I will conclude with a heartfelt congratulation, this is very good and I encourage you to continue writing.

    altalt
    Re: Monster King
    Fantasy ¡ UNK
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Replied to UNK

    🤔 maybe you're right, who knows?

    altalt
    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    Anime & Comics ¡ Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    This story is pretty unique in it's application. While there are quite a few stories about being reincarnated into a game, few of them really go into depth about the game. The character's instruction was well done, the only problem I could find was with the editing of some of the story. You're doing great author, keep it up!

    altalt
    I was a Nerfed Hero in Another World
    Fantasy ¡ kuhaku_sora
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Replied to Kandpalbhaskar010

    Thank you, I'll try and make it a story worth your interest

    altalt
    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    Anime & Comics ¡ Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Replied to UNK

    Really? What character 😂?

    altalt
    Danmachi: A Forgettable Familia
    Anime & Comics ¡ Supersam362
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    Interesting writing style. I can't say that battle royals themselves are unique, but this story definitely is!! I really enjoy how the character's interact with each other's it's really enjoyable and funny to whiteness. I really like this so far and would recommend to anyone wanting an epic victory royal (sorry, had to lol)

    altalt
    Welcome To Terminus
    Games ¡ Kandpalbhaskar010
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  • Supersam362
    Supersam3622yr
    Posted

    First off, really good story. The character's are introduced well and their interactions are fun and enjoyable to read. The world building is unique and really fleshes out the setting. I enjoyed the writing style, even if there were a few errors. This is an awesome story and I'm happy to give it it's 10th review. Great job author and keep up the good work.

    altalt
    Forsaken's Redemption
    Sci-fi ¡ ariam_N_M
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