Comfort_Wilson
A very amazing book. The plot is very good and has an amazing world background to follow through. The story progresses at a steady pace and the characters are well developed, especially the emotional aspect. Readers can visualize the entire scenes just by reading. The writing quality is also amazing but there are just a few spelling errors, but still they are much less compared to other books I have read. The author's hardwork really paid off in form of this amazing story.
This story has a lot of potential. I like the attitude of the female lead. The other characters are well thought too. Personally, I think the story would be better with more description about the world the story is in. The writing could use a bit of polishing too. Other than that, the story itself is interesting!
The story is good, it has tension, the dialogue is solid, and it's an entertaining read. On the other hand, I'd like to see some descriptions of the characters and what they look like as well as some more environmental descriptions. The story also needs some grammatic work done. All-all-all, I enjoyed this story. Keep going, author. I want to see more of your work. Remember to keep sharpening your sword and practicing. You'll blade will only get more deadly over time.
Overall great novel. I did spot a few spelling errors but honestly they don't matter all too much. Stable updates, story development I can't say much about since there's only 10 chapters so far. As for characters, they are realistic and deep, something you don't usually find in novels. If you are a fan of romance and you skip past this novel, you'll regret it.
This is a nice story, great concept, and cool story development. The world background was well-created, as well as the character design. There are a lot of interesting points across the chapters that will make you keep on reading! The writing quality was already good even though there is still room for improvements, especially when it comes to punctuations. Overall, this story is amazing, keep it up! I'd like to know more along the story :)
The story is a catch. The flow is good and keeps the reader engross. There are a few grammatical mistakes and need some editing done. Personally, I would have liked a little more background in the story as it progresses, which makes the readers more connected with the characters. The development of the story makes one come back to read more. Author, you have done a good job. Keep it up!