Review Detail of IrisSky in Loving The Tribrid

The story is a catch. The flow is good and keeps the reader engross. There are a few grammatical mistakes and need some editing done. Personally, I would have liked a little more background in the story as it progresses, which makes the readers more connected with the characters. The development of the story makes one come back to read more. Author, you have done a good job. Keep it up!