Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in Loving The Tribrid

The story is good, it has tension, the dialogue is solid, and it's an entertaining read. On the other hand, I'd like to see some descriptions of the characters and what they look like as well as some more environmental descriptions. The story also needs some grammatic work done. All-all-all, I enjoyed this story. Keep going, author. I want to see more of your work. Remember to keep sharpening your sword and practicing. You'll blade will only get more deadly over time.