This is a nice story, great concept, and cool story development. The world background was well-created, as well as the character design. There are a lot of interesting points across the chapters that will make you keep on reading! The writing quality was already good even though there is still room for improvements, especially when it comes to punctuations. Overall, this story is amazing, keep it up! I'd like to know more along the story :)
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