NeonLights
This novel is a hidden gem with a limited following of readers. If you enjoy alt history stories this is one you will enjoy. My only concern is that the author, Neonlights has dropped this. If Author-sama is reading this please, please, PLEASE keep this story going. Seriously PLEASE!!!!!!!!! The writing(grammar, spelling, sentence structure) is great. As far as I've read the historical references are accurate and the story building is balanced. So PLEASE DONT DROP THIS. This story is great and not about Nazis, if that is your concern. This is about Imperialism at its finest hour. Think a Second British Empire.
enjoyable alt history although it's hard to ignore how incredibly Chinese the dialogue is. lots of idioms, politicking, metaphors and faces; despite the accuracy of the portrayal of characters and events everything feels more than a little off? its odd considering the very real care that has gone into this story, that there would be such a significant cultural clash within it.
Needs Quite a bit of grammar work. The Premise of the story is quite good but there is a lack of development in the characters and in theIr background along with the thought process of the main character, and the reasons for his decisions. The story is based on old history but they don’t give in my opinion a significant explanation for why the von Hohenzollern Remain remain in power after the loss of world war one. Furthermore it fails to explain how most of the nobility maintained power in the same situation especially with the Junkers. Despite this it does give a small sense of the economic situation in Germany was in at the time Finally it appears that the author underestimates the technological developmental capabilities of other nations during this time even without accounting for brain drain that was happening in Germany, a process that helped more democratic nations gather a greater number of talanted academics. With all this said the storyline does proceed at a decent rate but could be better we could be more details to flavor the story up but it is a good read.
The story is good. Its understandable and not too complicated. The grammar need some fix but still readable, you wont lose a brain cell. Its based on ww2 by what im seeing. Just a lil tips for the author. This novel is great but so much for the idea. The fact that you use 'german' in ww2 setting where the 'german' is the powerhouse might trigger the china all time might censorship. Just a lil warning. Ccp really really love their censorship. Dont make this good fiction book fall cus some political issue. Peace
I know author probably not gonna see this but i just wanna say it was a good novel. The plot , world background , grammar everything is superb . I just have one question! Why? Why drop it? Why not continue why? Something happened that we don't know? Are you in some trouble ? Yours novel was superb i just don't understand why you drop it! Can i have my answers ?😐