Review Detail of James_McDonald in My German Empire

Needs Quite a bit of grammar work. The Premise of the story is quite good but there is a lack of development in the characters and in theIr background along with the thought process of the main character, and the reasons for his decisions. The story is based on old history but they don’t give in my opinion a significant explanation for why the von Hohenzollern Remain remain in power after the loss of world war one. Furthermore it fails to explain how most of the nobility maintained power in the same situation especially with the Junkers. Despite this it does give a small sense of the economic situation in Germany was in at the time Finally it appears that the author underestimates the technological developmental capabilities of other nations during this time even without accounting for brain drain that was happening in Germany, a process that helped more democratic nations gather a greater number of talanted academics. With all this said the storyline does proceed at a decent rate but could be better we could be more details to flavor the story up but it is a good read.