It has a great potential ! Bring and transLate more chapters author-san! Keep up the good work It has a great potential ! Bring and transLate more chapters author-san! Keep up the good work

We can’t see the picture

Ton ton no mi is more Powerful why not choose it

Is the timeline correct or not?

why is your story goes to kakin empire already? you miss the other important events such as messing with hisoka or spiders. and also too much description in every chapter. soo tiring to read. and getting super clinche. and hes getting emotional and too attach to a woman far from the start on how the mc's behavior.

hey author san,i think you forgot to mention the flow of time on where's part of the mc of the main cannon story now.

not only martial arts should he train.. Include also different cold weapon techniques and know their weaknesses, and also different bombs ,guns and missiles .And also real combat experience like war or etc... Just like yujiro hanma in his teen age ,you know.

hey author san what are 10 trillion for? He should use it openly noh?

hey author san! this is a great story soo far. but you should fix your grammar and writing quality a bit or hire a better writer to fix some error.

be in jail ifor ten years

its a great work. more chapter pls

true update more chaps

yoh author where's the latest chapters?its too long to wait.are you gonna still continue this story?

this a great story !but what a pity I can't read the latest chapters because its locked.hays.I hate it when a great story has a locked chapters.please authorsan unlock more chapters pls be more lenient to us poor peps.

hey authorsan ! is this story dropped? why are you not updating chapters anymore?this is a great story so pleased don't drop it. hey authorsan ! is this story dropped? why are you not updating chapters anymore?this is a great story so pleased don't drop it.

i like this story and its good! But this is only my opinion, its much better if you change the narrative POV to MC's POV.it feels like you are telling a history telling not the characters story! but if you do not want, its okay I'm just suggesting.keep up the good work author!

oh ok author-san! Hope you release soon the new hxh fanfic of yours!

i really like your fanfiction stories author-san! But one thing i discovered is that why all your stories is super rush? I want more and more of chapters the farther the story is going to be but you end it immediately. Where is the justice? :(

more chapters please author san. and when will be the release of your new hxh fanfic? i can't wait to read it now!

what an excellent and wonderful fanfic story! it was one of the best i've ever read! i hope it will continue and surpass 500 plus chapters!