Saeven07
Author here! I just found out that I can review my own book lol so here's a shameless review! This is a fun book to read, I know because I have fun writing it. And though it may not be perfect yet (as nothing is or will ever be), I hope you give this book a chance. I love theatre and Broadway so much that I just thought "what if...?" and I think that in itself is interesting. To those who are supporting it, thank you very much! I really appreciate it. That's all, All the love xx Jan
I had to say that it is totally worth reading. I am just hooked with the plot and the characters. It is a refreshing story, very captivating to read. I seriously like the Main Character, her background, her inner thoughts, and struggles within her new group of special friends and the ML. The flow of the story has a good pace and the narrative and descriptions are fascinating, I was seriously loving many paragraphs. And last but not least, Congratulations on WFP #11, definitely worthy. Keep on the good work author! I can't wait for more releases.[img=recommend]
5 STARS!! ββ¨ This is gold, a treasure, an amazing treasure. Definitely worthy of winning WFP #11. The story right from the very beginning draws you into the MC's world and lets you know exactly how she's feeling. How she's torn between obligation and finding her true self. I love how the descriptions are so unique and explicit. The comedy is goldπππ. I totally love Evelina thoughπ, as wicked as she's supposed to be she has wayy too many good sides to her. And West....sigh my heartπͺπ. I'll leave it at that but seriously this is a MUST HAVE. Add it to your library and love #WESTLINA with me, pretty please.....πβ¨
Writing Qaulity: 3/5 There were mistakes and weird wording that caused me to be confused on a few paragraphs that I had to reread them. Updated Stability: 5/5 I give that to everyone. Story Development: 4/5 Pacing is good, although some scenes had me lost (or that could just be me). Character Design: 5/5 Your characters are well-written, I like their personalities. World Background: 4/5 Good and descriptive. You let people know what to expect in the story whole your first chapter got them interested.
I am absolutely loving this story so far! The characters are three dimensional and really well fleshed out. The pacing of the story goes along smoothly, and the scenes flow nicely. The descriptions are vivid and visceral. I really feel for the characters, especially Evelina. Looking forward to seeing what comes next from this author, great job! Would highly recommend to anyone looking for an intriguing read.
Off the top of my head the first thing I thought when I began reading was that the Synopsis and perhaps the book cover does do the story itself justice! In fact the story itself is wonderful the world background is very different and is applied well to the story as in that itβs very well described. In fact all of whatβs written, is written perfectly well. No problems with spelling or grammar. Though Iβve read this type of novel before, it hasnβt been for a while. Letβs say itβs no wonder you got gold! I think youβve made your fantasy world and all of its laws very interesting and thankfully not stereotypical. I just hope you continue to post more chapters because your novel is really fantastic!
I guess I am the first one here but don't worry there will be many more people who will review your story, It's a good story and I was thrilled because of the vampire things, Just hoping you can upload more updates and add more chapters, In general your story is good and I highly respect you now author[img=recommend][img=update]
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