Just a fan of fantasy novels trying to write my own.
Brakets means anything that happens in his mind.
South Europe and north Africa means the sat is somewhere above the Mediterranean Sea
Those areas are beside each other for example it points to a part of Europe and Russia, meaning the sat would pe somewhere above the middle point above them.
And no technology at that point would have been able to detect them in time. Although, you are right, even if the next chapter is expaining what was actually going on there, a new reader would have no idea and might not continue following the novel. The start is a bit shaky because of that...
Haha, to be honest that will make perfect sense later. This is a novel which will deal a lot with time and there will be losts of time alterations. Just those leaders knowing and being able to fire off nukes was me being kind, an explanation will be given at a later chapter.
This is actually a nice piece. The world you have build is well described with much thought put into the characters. The pace of the story is good and it appeals to me. I would say to pay a bit of attention to commas, but other than that this is good and going to my collection. Nice work, author!
Thanks a lot for your support! To be fair, I have the book planned out until the end(which was a pain because of the time theme so a lot of things to think about, especially on later chapters). But I can't just dump all the information on the readers, so I really try to connect everything properly and build up the suspense which makes publishing take a bit longer. Work is a bit crazier this month than usual so chapters might take longer sometimes. Anyway, even though sometimes updates will come late, I will surely not drop this. I planned it too much and to be fair I am very excited about reaching the cool parts. So just be patient with me haha.
This is seriously interesting. To be fair, I don't read many books of this genre. Yours is really well put together with good plot narration and well-thought of characters. I think a faster pace would do good for the story as well. Well done, author!
haha, is that good or bad?