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EmpRabbit

EmpRabbit

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Just a fan of fantasy novels trying to write my own.

2018-03-15 JoinedGlobal
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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit1mth
    Replied to jotaro_Kujo

    Thanks for reading!

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit1mth
    Replied to Jaymoney101

    Thank you so much for your continuous support and sorry for the wait!

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Thereviewer48

    Brakets means anything that happens in his mind.

    [Life being..?Wait, Aisha!] Andrew's eyes became brighter as he saw the figure dashing out from behind a few trees. Aisha's face was red as she mustered all the power in her body to try to catch up with them.
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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Thereviewer48

    South Europe and north Africa means the sat is somewhere above the Mediterranean Sea

    As all of the keys were used, everyone turned with anxiety towards the only 3 screens still working in the room. In the beginning there were 85 screens in the room, each connected to a different satellite, through which all parts of the globe could be seen. After the meteor shower passed by the satellite layer, only three were left. Now, these three were pointing towards the USA, south Europe and north Africa, and one towards Japan and a part of the Pacific.
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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
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    Those areas are beside each other for example it points to a part of Europe and Russia, meaning the sat would pe somewhere above the middle point above them.

    As all of the keys were used, everyone turned with anxiety towards the only 3 screens still working in the room. In the beginning there were 85 screens in the room, each connected to a different satellite, through which all parts of the globe could be seen. After the meteor shower passed by the satellite layer, only three were left. Now, these three were pointing towards the USA, south Europe and north Africa, and one towards Japan and a part of the Pacific.
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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Daoist048876

    Thanks for reading!! I'll update as much as I can

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Daoist048876

    Haha, maybe...

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Daoist048876

    To be fair, the goal here was to introduce more of Aisha's character while also accentuating their relationship.

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Daoist048876

    And no technology at that point would have been able to detect them in time. Although, you are right, even if the next chapter is expaining what was actually going on there, a new reader would have no idea and might not continue following the novel. The start is a bit shaky because of that...

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Daoist048876

    Haha, to be honest that will make perfect sense later. This is a novel which will deal a lot with time and there will be losts of time alterations. Just those leaders knowing and being able to fire off nukes was me being kind, an explanation will be given at a later chapter.

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Daoist048876

    Glad to hear that! Please do tell what you found unpleasant in the first chap so that i can improve in the future. I always appreciate comments with suggestions!

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
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    This is actually a nice piece. The world you have build is well described with much thought put into the characters. The pace of the story is good and it appeals to me. I would say to pay a bit of attention to commas, but other than that this is good and going to my collection. Nice work, author!

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to s1_1h72

    Ah, no, not at all. It takes longer just because I don't have enough time to write enough in order to publish fast. If I could, I would pe publishing every day, but too much work to do.

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Jaymoney101

    Thanks a lot for your support! To be fair, I have the book planned out until the end(which was a pain because of the time theme so a lot of things to think about, especially on later chapters). But I can't just dump all the information on the readers, so I really try to connect everything properly and build up the suspense which makes publishing take a bit longer. Work is a bit crazier this month than usual so chapters might take longer sometimes. Anyway, even though sometimes updates will come late, I will surely not drop this. I planned it too much and to be fair I am very excited about reaching the cool parts. So just be patient with me haha.

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to s1_1h72

    It is, I am sorry for this. Deadlines are piling up and it has become a lot harder to write.

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
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    This is seriously interesting. To be fair, I don't read many books of this genre. Yours is really well put together with good plot narration and well-thought of characters. I think a faster pace would do good for the story as well. Well done, author!

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Jo_J

    Thank you so much for your kind words!

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to cinnamoncat

    haha, is that good or bad?

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Nekonigiri001

    Thank you for reading!!!

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  • EmpRabbit
    EmpRabbit2mth
    Replied to Poodlefluf

    Thanks for reading!!!

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