Its a bit frustrating for me and off putting to be frank... clearly its a chinese novel no?

Thank you for your support! I was actually feeling a little unsure whether to continue or not.

I also have another YakuzaXMafia novel that I’m writing if your interested, however it’s more fantasy focused.

Thank you so much 💖

I got the chills and my heart beat really fast when reading this. Geez It’s a really good book, it’s amazing I don’t know how you came up with something like this. But at least I know I’m not the only one with dark ideas for there novels! Haha. Just awesome let’s see what you’ll do next!

Definitely sensing the cute and fluffy vibes here! The Mc is definitely a girl with priorities and the bantering with her coworker is hilarious. I like it I can’t really figure out what the ML is like but it’s a **** romance, so maybe there’s some drama upcoming. It’s a good novel so read it- definitely recommend!

Hahahha lol

Your hilarious

Off the top of my head the first thing I thought when I began reading was that the Synopsis and perhaps the book cover does do the story itself justice! In fact the story itself is wonderful the world background is very different and is applied well to the story as in that it’s very well described. In fact all of what’s written, is written perfectly well. No problems with spelling or grammar. Though I’ve read this type of novel before, it hasn’t been for a while. Let’s say it’s no wonder you got gold! I think you’ve made your fantasy world and all of its laws very interesting and thankfully not stereotypical. I just hope you continue to post more chapters because your novel is really fantastic!

I assume it’s Victorian esque or like has a European historical twist?

I have a feeling FL was adopted because they couldn’t find the real daughter and now they treat her like shit because the real daughter is back so they must think she’s occupying her place and everything that’s supposedly hers should actually belong to the true daughter

I think Lan Xi could be like her mum

Although I’ve always liked Mafia and Yakuza stories, especially with the arranged marriage cliche plot line... I also really like fantasy and supernatural themes. I can’t really say where I came up with this, but usually when I can’t sleep I tend to make up stories in my head and this I suppose is the result of that lack of sleep one night. It’s definitely A LOT different to the standard arrange marriage plot lines. The characters especially our FL has a lot depth and backstory. She’s someone whose strong despite the circumstances, I’m likening her to a panther or a Jaguar. Unlike our ML who even I particularly don’t like. I guess he’s one track minded, dominant and blinded by his environment focusing on only his goals. Meaning his naive and obsessive. A bit like a snake. I’m talking about a lot of dark themes here because what doesn’t these Mafia/Yakuza organisations not do. However I’m definitely not going down the Adultery and prostitution rope. I just can’t do it! I think my girl Yuki has been through enough tyvm. I want to write the story properly, the way I have always wanted it to without the half assed oh it’s a Yakuza story! Without the incorporation of cultural influences and terminology. I’m not going to write it if it’s half-assed. A Romance with a lot of Mafia/Yakuza influences