Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Nice one, you surprised me twice in this chapter, the meeting with Narcissa Malfoy (or does her name changed back to Black now?) and the fact that Lucius Malfoy is apparently gay... at least in this fanfic. Thanks for the chapter 👍

I knew I read to many many fanfictions when I immedealy guessed that the hooded woman is Narcissa and that that Lucious is gay.

I don't see any demonstration of Intelligence on the MCs part for this chapter. I can only see stupid arrogance. There's no real benefit to him to help her only a tiny amount of risk.

i've seen quite a few HP fanfiction makes malfoy gay and evil so i'm not really surprised but i'm kinda suspecting these authors to be having a grudge/beef with gay men, if you author either use it as a plot device or because it's convenient or you want to include LGBTQ+ people i'm not complaining. But if you author are spreading hate, negativity, or implying that gay men are not true men, it's not cool. i'm just saying it here so sorry author if you are offended. (　^ω^) Lastly male characters with long hair are cool, look at Orochimaru, Jiraiya, Sesshomaru and byakuya etc. Lucius are tarnishing their reputation ಸ_ಸ

Thanks for the chapter. Every time I see a new chapter from this book I instantly read it, keep up the good work and happy new year!

Is the MC turning in to the generic Young master from wuxia?

I’m fine with the whole chapter except for one thing, you should remove the paragraph on Draco using the contract against his mother if you think of rehabilitating him, cause someone who can hurt his mother because she says things that are different from the father’s words simply cannot be saved, him doing that would show he is rotten, that parapgraph does not serve the chapter, if you want to put something instead you can say that she couldn’t talk to Draco because it betrayed the interests of Lucius

Since canon i always thought that if Narcissa had had the option of running away from Voldemort with Draco she would have done it. However, neither Dumbledore, the Order, Hogwarts, Harry or going to a foreign country could hide them from him, so she didn't do it. So in every fanfic where the mc makes its own organization to beat Voldy back i always think Narcissa is going to look for them.

Im glad he's not gonna bang her, Im still waiting on the ML and FL

Honestly, I began to irritate the ego of the main character, I thought everything would calm down over time. But no, now all the other characters began to talk together about What the Main character is beautiful, strong and blah blah blah. It's like I'm reading a gay novel...

awesome

this is a complete departure from the novels. Authorsbhave creative liberties but changing entire character personalities, and three at that more than halfway through the novel is just too much.

Thank you the author for the chapter. I have guessed it right! It was Narcissa Malfoy. However, I think the adding plot about Marriage's contract seemed to be overextended from the original story. I don't buy it.

i feel like having her be a part of his businesses is an unnecessary risk. he doesn't need her at all. he can protect her all he wants but why does he need her to join?

thanks author!! another great chap!! yiu had me spit my cola in my sister's face when i read the part lucius is gay 😆😆😆

So does this mean that Bellatrix is redeamable?

It's a shame he's not gonna bang her, could show her a good time.

xp

wonder is this harry potter or naruto fanfic

I don't get why people think of Narcisa as an unwilling victim, the Malfoys were always in the bad side, but after they experienced voldy's bad side they just wanted out, they end up as unwilling accomplices but they pushed and paved the way themselves.