Kaido:

This just might be the best Harry Potter stories out there excluding the original. With every chapter you are expanding this world you are creating. This goes way beyond the cannon. Every time this updates I am left theory crafting. It's like I am reading one piece haha. You have such a talent for story crafting. Fucking phenomenal

Honestly, despite only seeing words in front of me I really got goosebumps when Goku squared off with Vegeta. It maybe cringe to say this but no one inspires me more then Son Goku.

A shame, but it is what it is. You are the author. This actually had me invested, mainly because I haven't seen similar world building in any Pokemon fic i have read so far. Dropping this for yet another Multiverse cafe/restaurant harem fic...A shame indeed

Wait a minute, Lilith? Could Lilith be Lily spying on Adam for Irene? I am liking this.

Great chapter man. People just wanna see blatant wish fulfillment in every story they read. I for one like a bit of realism in my stories. Not too much too. This is a fiction after all :D

DDD Barry OP! I burst out laughing as I imagined a wall with little stick arms and legs running while shouting. hahaha

So the destruction primordial plans to do something to his planet and the system gives Grayfia a task to get him of said planet?

Classic cultivation "young mater" behaviour from these gods and emperors. It was satisfying to read how they got turned to gold after one breath attack.

Ngl I almost died from the sheer cuteness of this chapter. Bravo dude. I love a cute chapters like this.

One of the best

I don't consider this story bad at all. The fact the some people can't understand that Apollo has no human quality in him at all and is a God at the end of the day is proof enough that you have crafted an incredible main character.

Nice. Still the paranoid Dumbledoor, but for once he is not a "moron/dark lord in hiding" every fic nowadays portrays him to be.

Yeaaaaah I feel you. sometimes I find a new fic with 2 or 3 chapter and as soon as I open the comments "Harem?" It's getting ridiculous. Go touch some grass and stop asking for harem.