geof?

alrighty this had me laughing

is it feld or field you have both names for the first two chapters?

interesting

Thank you for the nice reply. Most authors tend to be mean when criticized. I really have enjoyed the story, but seeing him spend centuries away from family for an honest to god dumb side quest, blew me away. Then, once he gets home, all he gets is nagging and punishment. Lith stopped feeling relatable as a person at that point. A small piece of advice from me would be to have lith feel some amount of negative emotion towards his loved ones. No one is perfect, and adding that amount of imperfection makes the characters feel more believable. Conflict between characters adds an enormous amount of development. I do appreciate all your hard work though.

thanks man.

For 900 chapters did I read this and think it was an ok story. But then the 5th arc started and destroyed the novel. Lith has LITERALLY spent more time sleeping than being with his loved ones. Where is the slice of life in that? He has spent most of his time with two guys and a friend zoned girl than with the people he loves. This is supposed to be a romance story, but he has spent more time away from family and more time with friends by a 10 to 1 ratio. Is he secretly gay or something? Not to mention the author goes on to keep saying that he is now a vampire and above human morals, but proceeds to go on a 200 year long fiasco over some low level taunt by a person he LITERALLY hasn't known for 5 minutes. What do you even say to that? What was the point? I can't stress this enough. Lith would rather go around goofing off than spend time with his family. Also, he is a serious beta male. I mean this in all honesty and seriousness. Lith never has any negative emotion towards his females. He doesn't get angry, frustrated, or upset; even when they physically and verbally abuse him. He just says that they are doing it out of love and worry, and then take whatever punishment they dish out with zero complaints.

did I Miss anything important? This arc destroyed the novel, and I don't want to read it.

thanks man

where did you find the raws of this story?

wouldn't it be sunset instead of dawn?

I Don't know about one piece, but I hope Damien shows them who is boss!

it's gonna be funny when she starts making aggressive moves towards him.

I like it!

doing good.

I see free points walking.

thanks man!

thanks man!

did team rocket get a new member?

is he too old for Boa and Robin?