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KaosuKishi7mthCommentedI've been gone for a while due to school .. but now it's great to see one of the HP fanfic novels i've followed years ago đđ«Ą... Thank you author for a wonderful adventure with aedan
"You've got yourself a deal."- KaosuKishi1yrCommentedChapter 69 -------------ă ă-----------
- KaosuKishi1yrReplied to Daoistqm3CV0
well they did go through somewhat same circumstances in life...( e.g. how the people in their village treat them)
Naruto was stunned hearing the news before a look of anger appeared on his face, as Gaara was one of his close friends. - KaosuKishi1yrCommentedCh 1248 First Day Of School (3)
- KaosuKishi1yrReplied to Aseijuro
in google translate please?
I will no longer translate this book - KaosuKishi1yrReplied to SilverKingLord
i first thought of bruce banner and i was like... ' I don't remember him being like that'... then i remembered the other bruce from DC đ
Su Xiaoxiao: "You are Tony Stark after all!" - KaosuKishi1yrReplied to Nekomiko_succubus
he was thinking that he might made a mistake when he develop a cure... since he remembered he will make ultron to make the earth better only to see it became a murder-hobo A.I. in the end
The main reason for being so cautious is that because Tony was afraid he had made a mistake like Avengers 2 and would do bad things with good intentions, the result was catastrophic. - KaosuKishi1yrReplied to SlothElephant2k18
it should be paw since you don't eat the nails/claws LOL
"Saiki Kusuo, I remember your favorite food is coffee jelly! By the way, are you interested in tasting the claws of a beast emperor level bear?" - KaosuKishi1yrCommentedSymbol of Peace : "Reasonable... Undeniable..."
- KaosuKishi1yrReplied to SlothElephant2k18
bear paw actually
"Saiki Kusuo, I remember your favorite food is coffee jelly! By the way, are you interested in tasting the claws of a beast emperor level bear?" - KaosuKishi1yrReplied to Aseijuro
do you know the original's name ? and where to find it?
The memorial service did not last long, after the end of the ceremony of honoring the dead, Sarutobi Hiruzen made a statement that shocked everyone. Stating that the village had suffered too many casualties in this war and that most of it was due to his incompetence, Hiruzen announced his resignation as Hokage just after the election of the Fourth Hokage was over. Although many of the villagers objected, Hiruzen did not go back on his words and announced two candidates for the position of the Fourth Hokage. One of them was his own student and one of the three legendary Sannin Orochimaru, and the second was the man who made a big name for himself in the Third World War - the Yellow Lightning of Konoha - Namikaze Minato. - KaosuKishi1yrReplied to Kingsav_Savage
ahh how's it BS? đ€š
Mrs Reynolds smiled. "What nonsense. You are our son, and nothing can change that." - KaosuKishi1yrReplied to Sleepy_Neko_God
she speak out*
This paragraph has been deleted. - KaosuKishi1yrReplied to 18484746
well now she DID looked down on the MC đ€·đ€·
Honestly, he remembered her being quite bitchy in the original timeline as well, looking down on Naruto and the like. And he'd never really been a big fan of her. - KaosuKishi1yrCommented
if its too op you could just end it early and finish it without you forcing it to last more chapters.. or you could make OC more stronger enemies that could give the MC a challenge.... đ€·đ€· usually OP mc are being partnered with the slice of life genre since they don't have enemies that are a threat to them.... and they last longer than the usual since the author is focused on the slice of life part... but hey at least your learning and that's what mattersđđȘ
What I learned the most in my first novel was not to make an mc too strong at the start if you want to write a good plot, hell, I had to bring four Otsutsuki from the future to give mc a challenge in my first novel to keep the story alive. - KaosuKishi1yrReplied to ScionOfDegeneracy
- KaosuKishi1yrCommentedThe next moment, Orochimaru who was thrown in the air, due to force of gravity began to fall down, Azuma down pulled out the blade on his back, pointing it towards the falling Orochimaru.
- KaosuKishi1yrReplied to Abordoaj
he's confident of his cockroach skills đ€·
He has heard about the deeds of Azuma and from his old friend, he even learned the details, showing Azuma had the strength to fight Kage Rank Shinobi, but he is also the legendary Sannin. - KaosuKishi1yrPosted
Welp the author knows what his doing ... i mean the chinese author of this fanfic.. a lot of chinese fanfic authors dont follow the timeline and sometimes change the behavior of the characters we know overall thats why it really sucks for me if that happens.... but it did not happened on this one and i was very hooked in it until the latest posted chapters... also although translator/author san could change a few names for the readers to recognize them, but as a veteran in MTL on chinese fanfics this one is translated fine compared to the other fanfics i encountered like i couldnt get past the 1st few chapters cause i dont understand jack shit..... so this is a well done on the author/translator part since its still readable and entertaining as well.... so dont let those grammar nazis get to you... yes you could improve but your going there theres no hurry... every one has his/her own pace as long as your fine and happy while doing it
- KaosuKishi1yrCommentedCh 217 217