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  • Mepha
    Mepha8mth
    Replied to Everythingonurmind

    Dude write the names of these top 5 ff. IN Webnovel is a ton of rubbish, and it's very hard to find good ff on Chinese sites.

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    Witcher: The Divine Hunter
    Others · MkoPoland
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Replied to romeotango148

    I don't want to offend your feelings and views of the world bro... But, in the Middle Ages, the Son is the first line of Heirs / Warlords / Politicians for the House. And the Daughters... a political resource for rapprochement with other houses through marriage bonds.

    Edward raised her hand, which was very pale at the moment, and planted a kiss on it. It was his farewell to the beautiful and admirable She-Wolf. Maybe, in another timeline, Edward would have rescued her and married her instead of giving her to his brother. But he had made the decision, and he had to live with it. He would not falter for even a moment after making his decisions. Edward did not want to sacrifice his ambitions for a woman. He would never do something like that for Lyanna nor Ashara herself. Edward saw that there was a good chance for him with Ashara. He could work on changing Ashara's personality to his liking so that she could help him to achieve his ambitions.
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    Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer
    TV · GNaNA
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Posted

    Not bad, though naive in places, but for a novice author who's mostly interested in Marvel and Anime, that's commendable. Welcome to harsh reality, that's how I'd like to greet all authors of fanfiction on anime and other garbage. (And those authors who thwarted anime and GOT... a separate cauldron in hell awaits them!) Anyway, back on topic, the ff has potential, but I would advise the author to write while he can, and after the inspiration is gone, start editing his work. Take out the anime, then - there's the naivete of being a 5 year old super genius, sword master, and so on. Dig into the GOT wiki lore a bit, but don't get carried away, it's purely to avoid logical holes in the story. Well, start a new book, already with a mature version of the protagonist, more serious, and a little - a little depth for the atmosphere. A more severe version of the protagonist, you can emphasize bad childhood, more battles, training warriors, taking over Skagos, becoming a Chieftain. You can add a local floki (you watched the Vikings, right?), which will help build a drakkar, with these drakkars can go loot all in a row, from the pirates to the land of the blog. You can arrange a mini-conflict with the North of - for MC raids, the Starks are still strong). In general, the peace agreement with the Starks, construction in Skagos, the opening of a new trade route to Essos, you can do whaling. You can drop in on the Wildlings, recruit them, and there's a zombie encounter, you get the idea). Conflicts, Wars, intrigue, kingdom building, and so on and so forth! That is - the potential is huge, you can write a chic fanfic, about a brutal savage pirate. And so I wish the author good luck, and I hope he doesn't go back to Comics and Anime again.

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    GOT: Ice Dragon of the North
    TV · flowing_lightning
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Posted

    I've read 27 chapters, and I can tell you with certainty that this is not my cup of tea. It started off surprisingly well, especially considering what site we are on now. But from the moment the protagonist got into his first battle, as the author himself ironized, it all went downhill. No, it wasn't a fatal problem that the protagonist foolishly revealed himself to be a genius. No I roughly understand the reason for it. 1 - The author wanted to make the protagonist an exemplary peer of Jon Snow and others. It's not clear why this was so important, maybe he wants to marry the mc to beauties from the show, Marjorie for example? 2 - Because of the first point, the author created a time limit, there is so much to do, and there is not enough time to do it all! So the main character started to realize his plans as a 4 year old child. 3 - The author realized that it was hard to achieve the planned goals for a 4 year old child from a retarded home and... So he added a certain "The Watcher" to the fanfic. All would be well, but all this began to accumulate like a snowball, which only harms the book. 1 and 2 - Because of the author's decision to make mc a contemporary of Jon Snow, the author unknowingly caused a lot of problems, both logical, in the form of absurdity of what is happening, such as serious negotiations of the Queen of Thorns with a 4-year-old child. So problems with dissonance of the - above described, and suffered from the characters and the behavior of the characters from the original. 3 - In an attempt to smooth the angles with the new character, the author has turned a more - less serious fanfic in a full Marty Stu. The Watcher turns out to be a very gifted teacher, revered by his crowd of apprentices. By his mere presence, he has created a shield for the protagonist to keep him from being killed as a child. But that's not all, the apprentices... These apprentices in turn turned out to be masters of combat, espionage and so on, and of course by all the laws of the genre, they will train soldiers for mc, train spies and all the right people-subordinates to realize the goals of our mc. And I'm even silent about politics in general, and the reactions of the various factions to the antics of the protagonist. For myself, one of the main problems of the fanfic is its motif: World Peace. Which is quite naive in the setting of A Song of Ice and Fire. You're already subconsciously beginning to downplay the merits, skipping details and prodigious work on the fanfic, because you can already smell the rainbow ponies and the song about friendship. Exaggerating of course, but I think you get the point. In the end, we have a well-written work where the author was able to balance plot and humor. Quality product, which, unfortunately, slowly began to fall to the level of Webnovel.

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    Game of Thrones : Paladin of Old Gods (Draft)
    TV · Duncan_Randar
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Replied to Rangga_S
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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Commented
    Abdul: It's probably because they all want to look their best in the audition. Though, aside from Rachel, I don't think any of them are particularly good looking.
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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Replied to DreamThree

    I've just started reading and I'm concerned about the copyright issue. Many people, myself included, read novels about Actors, singers, and so on, for their opportunities and chances. You're interested in reading how a character picks good, iconic roles in movies. Well, or sings equally good songs, and you as a reader enjoy it immensely. I, for example, listen to the music the main character sings in the background, or watching chapters that describe how different characters watch a certain movie. You want to watch those movies yourself, and more than once I've had it that while reading a chapter I caught a flashback of a movie and went for 2 hours to watch the movie). And so from here comes my question, in your novel will only author content, which no one needs (No offense bro, but I'm even too lazy to read these songs as poems.), or will still be "plagiarism"? It's just that if the novel will only have author's content, it makes no sense to me to read such a thing. Especially with regard to the topic of movies, you know, sorry for the rudeness, but so far, read the chapters left only a negative impression.

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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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    Mepha1yr
    Replied to UnderworldZ

    What have you been reading, share bro)! And to be honest, I've even switched to Chinese entertainment industries because of the lack of Hollywood novels... Although there are still a few novels with a female protagonist, but I don't read that kind of stuff. There's also a piece of crap from the author of I'm in Hollywood. If I'm not mistaken he has two novellas about Hollywood and both are total crap. So far, the best one is White 13 (that's the author's name, well that's how his nickname is translated in English... you get it.). If anything, check this list, I've thrown links in the comments, but that's all materiaal). Curse webnovel they don't even have a private messaging function, but notifications of donations come as a message.... https://www.novelupdates.com/viewlist/13965/

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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Replied to xNoReadNoLifex

    You can check out the Game of Thrones ffs, but if you're looking for that particular level of novel, there's too few of them. Not that there aren't any, but you're likely to be disappointed, because the balance of realism in such works is very immature. As a result, instead of a sensible protagonist, the author, because of his experience, makes the hero a complete idiot. Either the text will be too naive, then our hero is described as a fairly intelligent man, but a dozen chapters later he behaves like a 6-year-old boy.

    Ch 161 Hiatus
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    My Mother Told Me
    TV · MedTryglaw
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Commented

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yrHXMhrs6Qg

    "Welcome, kid!" "Ever since the ancient battle, we haven't had new blood in a long time!"
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    WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
    Anime & Comics · Keetarp
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Commented

    It sounds too Chinese, that is too ridiculous and stupid. I hope the author stops taking inspiration from Xianxia, because Xianxia and Logic can't exist together. Even my text, where I put the words Logic and Xianxia in the same line, is already beyond absurd.

    "I, Lita Farlier the Giant Kemoyin Empress plead to summon the Immortal Bloodline Demon Trimurti Adhishesha to protect it's loyal servant and bring chaos to it's enemy!" Lita seemed to release a holy glow as a radiance similar to angels erupted from her, with her words a whole web of Kemoyin bloodline was connected as they wailed tragically for the justice and prevail of their Holy Empress!
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    WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
    Anime & Comics · Keetarp
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Replied to IiILoVeMe

    Harem, but not a Turkish harem with political intrigue, women in the harem do only what harems are created for. They give birth to heirs for the Harem master.

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    My Mother Told Me
    TV · MedTryglaw
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Commented
    "...and how do we know that he didn't start that fire!... A man was sent to the hospital!... Probably some masked psychopath!... SPIDER-MAN IS A MENACE!" The clip showed a small compilation of J Jonah's thoughts on Spider-Man.
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Commented
    The section of plans meant for if the Reapers were defeated and he didn't survive had been more along the lines of fever dreams and grand ambitions, city layouts and lines of new research he thought would be cool. He'd even set aside a set of plans and funds to build mansions for all the people who had fought beside them… except Jacob.
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    Mass Effect SI: Ultimate Krogan
    Video Games · JManM
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Commented

    And my keyboard!

    "I'd been told that this is where the true spirit of Skyrim lives. Honor and blood and all that." I stood up and looked around, "But all I hear is 'Where's the gold?'. When the gods damned dragon born shows up looking for help on an adventure, even one that sounds simple, are we not the people who should leap at the chance. The dragons have returned and the Dragonborn comes, the world is changing and for all time it will be remembered that the Companions refused the call of adventure. But not me. You have my axe, Brienne."
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    Mass Effect SI: Ultimate Krogan
    Video Games · JManM
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Replied to Robin_Craft

    Well, we have such public baths + sauna, and women often take their boys there too, if they are still small. Children are such creatures that they do not remember their childhood, I mean earlier childhood, which is why they are allowed into the women's sauna + bathhouse.

    "Well Mary, I just realized that you are really beautiful, especially when you wearing that office lady suit, it looks very hot."
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    Hollywood RE:CODED
    Realistic · BukanOrang
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Replied to Robin_Craft

    You definitely did not get into the public women's bathhouse, at 5 - 10 years old)).

    "Well Mary, I just realized that you are really beautiful, especially when you wearing that office lady suit, it looks very hot."
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    Hollywood RE:CODED
    Realistic · BukanOrang
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Commented
    DON'T FORGET MY STONES!
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Replied to 8502

    No, this one:

    [Insert picture of Tom Holland here]
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Mepha
    Mepha1yr
    Commented

    The author slow down, the main character just came to Hollywood, Era is still very far away.

    "Hello, Emma here, my question is for Ian. Ian, do you think the rumors of 'Ian's movie era' are not true?"
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    Hollywood King
    Movies · TC_Liyanage1
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