why does every fan fic have to be harem. It was going well why ruin it. Great story I hope you can reflect and keep it moving without going crazy with harem stuff

no harem

no harem

MORE!!!!! hahaha thanks for the chapter going to have to read this weekly so i have like 5+ chapter to read each time, cliff hangers destroy me hahhaah

love this story so far, But i need more chapter hahahha :)

fantastic story, cannot wait for more!!!

No hate but I think you have worked yourself into a corner and you are just trying to explain your way out of it. Like no issues i like the story but you have spent the past few chapters just trying to explain your decisions which really interupts the flow of the story. I think it would of been better if you had just made him ask out tanya and it didn’t work then just kinda left him there without doing anything with the other girls. Cause also with alice who I’m assuming is going to be the soulmate and future partner you don’t want to see your ”mate” as you have described it in that kind of relationship with someone else.

no harem

Don’t listen to the idiots, it is an amazing story and I and alot of readers while we have our opinions we usually love the direction the writer is going to go some might make a comment assuming things or make a prediction which never happens because it is not their story but I am most others love the direction the author has and want to read your ideas while some might put there own opinion on it overall we want the directions others take or we would of written our own in our way

This isn’t your book this is who dares win from fanfiction . net by OlegGunnarsson. The dude hasn’t posted a chapter since april i wound know it was one of my favourite novels and he just stopped which is annoying but happens all the time in the fanfiction world. But you should at least reference him in the bio. If you are going to continue the story past him I am keen to read

I loved the story, have a great breka can hope you come back refreshed

I love that you are back i love the story keep it up

thanka for the chapter cant wait for more

Dude i don’t know where you live, but you shouldn’t have yo pay off breakages at work. it would be covered by insurance that the company has. Making you pay that off is illegal and if you are in a union you should inform them of this.

Gwen

or atomic manipulation

got to be cosmic entity constructs along with a genius level of intelligence like phastos but taught about the real world from his mother and father to create a company that competes with stark industries in the energy sector or something. also for a name maybe atlas i know it wasn’t a choice but it matches i feel

that worked, thanks very much. also fantastic story so far cannot wait till this version catches up with the old one so excited to see the changes and the future of the story

chapter 7 is still the announcement

just finished rereading and the finishing the old version of this book and it was fantastic. The only issue i had is there wasn’t more stuff based after like the epilogue was really short and would love if you made it go way further than ending right after voldermort