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GinOokami15dCommentedWow, what a good-hearted author
Heyhey people, Bronzman here. And I bring you a gift, the gift of choice.- GinOokami20dCommented
He is a Fool, after all.
'Seems like Sampo has a way to rile up March despite not actively doing so.' - GinOokami1mthReplied to YellowDumpyNoob
Do you have any good Nihility characters (at least 2) that you can use, and felt like your account needs 1 more hypercarry? Then you may want Acheron. If you have Dan Heng IL, you probably want Sparkle. However, keep in mind that Acheron needs her LC
Acheron really traumatized Black Swan and gave her PTSD during their dance lol. - GinOokami1mthReplied to DaoistZv93Zu
Yup, it'll be quite a huge spoiler too, if the leaks so far turns out to be true. But then again, being a huge spoiler or not depends on the story that'll be released on 2.2
Stelle had bits of disheveled hair sticking out and Yuuto was pretty confident that she just woke up a few minutes ago. - GinOokami1mthReplied to GinOokami
Whoops, wrong paragraph
Stelle had bits of disheveled hair sticking out and Yuuto was pretty confident that she just woke up a few minutes ago. - GinOokami1mthCommented
Sam drip marketing came first, but they realized it was stupid of them to do so, so they relocate him to another version instead
Stelle had bits of disheveled hair sticking out and Yuuto was pretty confident that she just woke up a few minutes ago. - GinOokami3mthCommented
I don't know why it took this long for me to realize, but this Odin isn't any different from God of War: Ragnarok's Odin. They play (or at least what I think this Odin is doing) a part of someone approachable. Sure, their methods are different, but the purpose is.
"Just look at them bounce, that roundness, yet they're also so firm! Really, that Biblical God, he was a man of taste." The Norse god nodded to himself. "Makes you wonder why he would give that kind of body to such a kind and selfless woman. Doubt she'll ever touch a man, let alone put those assets to use. Such a shame." - GinOokami3mthReplied to GinOokami
- GinOokami3mthPosted
After like, some years of not reading Einlion's work, it is honestly surprising he would write something like this. Not really a bad read, but I doubt webnovel readers would like it. But hey, what do I know about others? Well anyway, let me explain the rating that I gave. There maybe some spoilers, so be warned. TL;DR, give it a read before you decide anything.Writing quality:The writing is easier to read. The use of punctuation is certainly almost a blessing, because some writers really (I mean, REALLY) like to use run-on sentences. But, that is to be expected from Einlion. So a good job there.Story Development:The progress of the story is in a good pace. Not too fast, but not too slow either. Each chapter feels like its a new day in that world. Yes, there is a big time-skip somewhere at the start of the "arc". But I think that skip is appropriate, because I definitely don't want to read many chapters that is basically summoning people. There isn't any serious plot, so I don't have any comment for that.Character Design:Because the plot is basically "having sex 4 days a week", there isn't anything major I can comment on regarding the MC himself aside from MC becoming a bit too deviant. But that's the power of having sex with multiple partners can do to a man.Update Stability:I don't expect a chapter or two a day like his old work used to be. So long as Einlion has 2 to 3 chapter updates per week, I'm good.World Background:Nothing I can say about this one, because the world background is just an island with a long-ass tower. But, the world building is certainly in a good direction.Overall, a good past time. I think you should give this a try before deciding on anything. You should keep in mind that there isn't anything serious about the story, so don't go in expecting it. Also, if a dick in your ass can make you gay (if you enjoy it, of course), a bit of lesbian play doesn't mean she's a changed woman...for now. Lol
- GinOokami6mthReplied to VanHellsing6969
Are you saying a woman—or rather, a person—liked to be manipulated into liking someone?
With his initial interaction with Yuigahama going well, Hachiman realized the importance of seizing the opportunity. While he might not be able to immediately become her best friend or boyfriend, he was determined to build a strong foundation for a good relationship with her. - GinOokami6mthReplied to VanHellsing6969
Give me an example of it then
Deep down, Hachiman couldn't help but feel conflicted about his tactics, questioning his own motives and character. - GinOokami7mthCommented
"Build a strong foundation for a good relationship", says the one being creepy and manipulative. At least make the manipulation less obvious
With his initial interaction with Yuigahama going well, Hachiman realized the importance of seizing the opportunity. While he might not be able to immediately become her best friend or boyfriend, he was determined to build a strong foundation for a good relationship with her. - GinOokami7mthCommented
Well, if you think about it for a moment, you don't even have to use manipulation to get to know Yui. It feels very forced (most likely planned that way) and doesn't really promote a good way for readers to connect to the relationship. But hey, I'm just nitpicking, and almost all harem stuff will always be that way, especially those with systems.
Deep down, Hachiman couldn't help but feel conflicted about his tactics, questioning his own motives and character. - GinOokami7mthReplied to BasedOnLuck
Maybe because the author had a plan that the system will go missing in the future. If, at the end, it doesn't go missing, then the author just wanted to add more word count
Until he loses his System...he is going to use it to the maximum! - GinOokami7mthCommented
Ah yes, the "court word play" begins.
Shirou couldn't help but wonder if they were playing some sort of political prank on him. He cast a casual glance at Merlin, who continued to wear a smile on his face. After a moment of thought, he spoke up. "I understand completely. Sir Ywain was so happy to see an old friend that he forgot to greet me. It's understandable to get caught up in the moment." - GinOokami7mthCommentedCh 81 Chapter 64: Start of a New Origin
- GinOokami7mthReplied to Smiley_sx
Well, the 'incest' doesn't really happen, but it's kinda insinuating that it will go that way.
"Good job, daughter. Just remember, steer clear of the weird 'incest' path and stay on the straight path, okay? Don't worry, I won't exchange you for some absurd gemstone." - GinOokami7mthCommented
I didn't realize what this meant the first time I read it. But I do now and it made me regret a little bit to re-read this part past midnight
"She seduced you and three other strapping young men from prominent households. She is as loyal as a whore in a whorehouse." Bartford sneers. "I almost pity you, Your Highness. With so many men sharing your bed and passion blinding you, how can you be sure it's Marie you're pleasuring and not someone else?" - GinOokami8mthCommented"You would stand with the likes of Bartford, Chris?!" Brad demands the light blue Armor saluting with the other three Armors with practiced synch. "What is there to gain from associating with someone who would willingly stand in the way of true love?!"