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Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, the supernatural(elfs, magical necklaces), the fantasy realm sort of thing It's a nice plot, the going to a different realm synopsis made me think of Alice in wonderland (it so happens it was partly inspired), but you've taken that and brought it into a beautiful story line. The unique names is something I admire. The first chapter "In the vast woods" was filled with thrilling sights, why was Rosettatu running? What was she doing in the woods? Why was she scared of being found out? How did that elf know her name? I hope all these are addressed in the next chapter! I personally love Fantasy novels! I have added this to my reading list! ❤️❤️❤️❤️💓 All being said, keep up the good work.
I've read a couple of chapters and this story is pretty interesting. I liked the vivid descriptions of the surroundings and what the character was experiencing. This story feels like Cinderella except instead of locking her in her room, Cinderella's step family was forcing her to go to the ball and marry an abusive prince. This also feels like The Wizard of Oz except Dorthy never wants to go home to Kansas. I was a little confused at first because the first chapter was talking about a woman named Rosetta while the second chapter was talking about someone named Rose Ann. I initially thought that they were the same person since Rose can be a nickname for Rosetta but then I found out, in the second chapter, that Rosetta is the MC's mom. I like the order of how the chapters shift from past to present time. Odd numbered chapters take place in the past while even numbered chapters take place in the present.
Perfect grammar√ Show not tell√ Intriguing√ Every wording is emphasized with meaning and atmosphere, it's good for someone who likes to immerse themselves with the story. I'm not a professional writer myself so I can't point anything bad within this story but hey, It's something good for your time, a hidden gem hiding from a thousands and thousands of other similar gem with unique and it's own aesthetic. Kudos for the author for making such a wonderful story It's really recommend, I've only read a couple of chapter but I will finish it in the future
Writing is on point! Gosh, it's very well written. Especially, at the beginning where the MC is running away in the woods. It's so well depicted. One of the best novels I've ever read with how good the writing is. I also added this book to my library for my inspiration for writing :3 No words left, 5 stars!
The writing is confusing and not a lot of background on characters. i stopped after the 3rd chapter because it was so confusing that I got bored.the main character seems to be not very intelligent and barely has any original thoughts. as a reader i dont care about her so if she died i would be ok with it. i gIve this story 1 star. and thats being generous .
At the beginning of the chapters, I could sense that this story is top-notch. There's a bit of a drama where it brought my emotion into a turmoil, making me wanting to read it again. I really love knights and magic genre, so I am looking forward for the progression (if the story is yet to be finished) of the plot.
Good day, this is me the Trademaker and as promised I will review this work. The story is quite interesting despite of me reading the first chapters. It is fun and easy to read, I can understand well the dialogue, the actions of the characters. I am not fan of female main characters but the character of the main story is quite remarkable. She is strong I can tell and by the way she speaks towards other characters is a testament to it. I give this story 4.8 rating because I had fun reading it and it is fun as well. That's all for now thank you!
The story is intruiging and Interesting. Yes the characyer development is good same as the grammar, but the story is pretty predictable. I hope you can give some unexpected moments specially some twist that will change the faith of the characters drastically, so that they can feel more humane. But overall it was an amazing work! Good job writer...