The pace is slower than expected but the story itself is good. Good descriptions and the narration is well done. The chapter length however differs as the story progresses. Not a bad thing I say but what is important is that the story itself is moving in a steady pace. The world is intriguing and the concept of time travel also. Maybe as I read the story further I will understand the complexity of the world and its concepts. Well written and well executed in terms of writing, That's all for my review. Thank you!
I have learned a lot from your writing as well! :) It's an enjoyable read, the action is just too good and it really reflects the way the world you designed it to be. Continue writing, you've quite a lot ahead of you!
Great quality of writing, good chapter length and descriptions which greatly entertain readers. The fight scenes are well described and well detailed. The atmosphere of the criminal underworld and what it means to live if I were correct in a dystopian world, is well described in the story. The book is a good read and I recommend it for it's quality, chapter length and its story itself. That is all what I can say. Thank you for reading!
The writing style of this novel is unique, not a conventional way of writing novels. However, the plot is quite intriguiging and is interesting. The quotations at the beginning of the chapters also makes justice as well. It gives a sense of insight to the chapters. This novel is a good read and I totally recommend it.
The writing of the story is superb, easy to read and the descriptions are really well defined. The story itself is intriguing with elements of RPG on it. The author is well versed on his style in writing and I can tell of the experience and mastery of the language he uses. All in all, I give this novel a perfect 5 because I have seen such skill of writing the author possess. Keep up the good work author!
Thank you for your review! Verlusia is actually inspired by our country the Philippines and the political landscape is similar to our world. The only difference is the Spanish and English influence which I manipulated a bit. I am glad you liked my story. I really appreciate your words! Thank you!
Thank you so much for this review! I hastily updated this story in the early parts, from chapters 1 to 20. The story was originally voiced in 1st person and I decided to convert it to 3rd midway. The editing was hastily done too that's why I was not able to spot some mistakes. Also, the R-18 scene was rather symbolic than erotic. I do not know if I was able to portray it well. Anyways, I will try to improve the issues that is mentioned. Thank you once again for reading and the review for my work. The TradeMaker
Thank you for your review! I'm glad you appreciated my story despite of its flaws. I will try my best to improve both the story and the issues mentioned.
Thank you for your review! I am glad that you liked some of the aspects of my story. I will try my best to improve and the parts of the story that needs to be corrected.
Thank you very much! I will fix my issues about my grammar. I appreciate your review and thank you for the tips.
Good day, I can say that this story has a lot of good points. It is good in the sense that it is faithful to its genre. The plot has been thoroughly detailed to what the story is about. The characters are also well detailed. Interactions and relationship with the characters are reasonable. They do not just exist for no reason at all. Everyone has motives and I like that. The power play between politicians too is evident. It really depicts of an environment and atmosphere of political setting where interest matters. Politicians have interests and these interests and power is the reward. This is a good novel, everyone please give this one a try. That's all for my review and have a nice day! The Trademaker
Good day, this is me the Trademaker and as promised I will review this work. The story is quite interesting despite of me reading the first chapters. It is fun and easy to read, I can understand well the dialogue, the actions of the characters. I am not fan of female main characters but the character of the main story is quite remarkable. She is strong I can tell and by the way she speaks towards other characters is a testament to it. I give this story 4.8 rating because I had fun reading it and it is fun as well. That's all for now thank you!
I would not think twice giving this story a flat 5 for these reasons: 1. The characters are portrayed greatly. 2. Great flow of story 3. Great premise 4. Interesting story 5. Easy to read and follow I did not mind turning pages for more as I read this story. For me this story is perfect, not too long, easy to read and it really gives you the gist of what the story is all about. Very good to read, funny and heartwarming as well. The intro parts are well written too. I will read this story further and will post an update review. Thank you for introducing me this story! The Trademaker
Hello author and readers! This is The Trademaker, I will write my review and my opinion about the story. My impression about this story is that it is a good read, it has good introduction and most of all, good storytelling! The quality of writing is good, very descriptive and engaging. The elements in the story is also likeable so as the plot. What actually caught my attention when reading this book is the fist two chapters. It really draws you in to the story. I will keep this story in my library and may add another review. Thank you for introducing me to this story. I have fun in reading it. Thank you and have a nice day! The Trademaker
This story reminds me of Philippine Telenovela's however, in a nice and better way as possible. The dialogue between characters are good as well. The arguments and conversations between the characters can be well defined and understood. A good story, intriguing and most of all exciting to read. That's all for this day. I recommend this story to those who are fan of the genre. Have a nice day! The Trademaker
Good day, I am here to drop a review on your story. Here is what I have observed as a reader, the story is quite a slow build but it introduces you to the characters, the setting and the story. The pace is not fast, enough for you to catch up with the story. Writing quality is also good, I have no issues towards it. Character design too is also good, you can tell their character. World background, at least in reading the earlier parts of the story, you can picture out where and what place it took place. Overall, this story is a good read. I recommend it if you are fond of the genre. That's all for this day, I hope you have a good day!