TrinityPhoenix
Always aiming to be a rainbow at the end of a thunderstorm.
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Sorry, I will fix this one. It was supposed to be Mrs. Walker. But my mind focused on Roxie instead😅 Don't worry, I will edit this out.
I like your writing style, author. It is highly descriptive, making the readers feel as if they saw, heard, felt, and experienced the objects described in the story. Especially, the story of Arthur's adventure in his new world by using his existing knowledge from his old life is fascinating. It's like one of those promising stories of isekai. Also, from the synopsis itself, it already looks appealing enough, as well as the beginning of the chapter. Please do keep up the good work author!
At first, I thought this story would be like another Solo Leveling type, but after I read through the initial process of the story and got to where there are people watching them. It gives me a vibe of Maze Runner and Hunger Games at the same time. I think the author had plotted this story well from the start because every sentence was clearly written and structured. I found no grammatical errors. I'm really amazed. Keep it going, I'd like to read this more in the future!
Recommended for those of you who like to read Mystery/Thriller, this book is for you. Although it still only has 5 chapters this story is very intriguing from the beginning, it leaves you to wonder what's going on and what will happen next, that will make you want to read further. I'm glad I did, its worth it to read further. I hope the author will keep continuing writing because this story is amazing and very promising! Keep up the good work author!