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Kagio
KagioLv32mth
2024-08-19 08:01

Reading till the end of the free chapters i am not happy with the pace and story so far. mc is weak af, everyone hates him and he still is not in the training phase. for 40+ chapters it just feels like a prolouge and i have to say it, i just wasted my time in hope that the mc does something good. the are 10+ characters and everyone hates him. he does nothing to correct it. he just gets beating up. no romance and mc is so bad and game focused that he ihnores anything. honestly its too mich of a waste to wait for the plot to have a good moment about mc. everything is negative, he get broken bones every 5 chapters. people trash talk him every 2 chapters. bro why did i even hope that the author will put something good here?

Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Noob6_writer9
4.4
251 Chs

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Kagio
KagioLv3

never ever am i gonna give a novel a chance again and just stick to the 20 chaps rule . so thanks author for destroying my limited time and thanks for being one of the reason why i hate trash novels and why i should not look at view count and a good villainess story.

2mth
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Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

Welcome.

Kagio:never ever am i gonna give a novel a chance again and just stick to the 20 chaps rule . so thanks author for destroying my limited time and thanks for being one of the reason why i hate trash novels and why i should not look at view count and a good villainess story.
2mth
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Anime_Sama_8317
Anime_Sama_8317Lv3

The reason mc never corrects them is because he wants to make them hate her and he believes or he is cursed, if he’s love that person that person dies like when he told 2 person in the past 1 of them died the very same day and when he told his aunt she got executed by his mother thinking she was tryna seduce.

1mth
Anime_Sama_8317
Anime_Sama_8317Lv3

If his mother finds out they cooked

Anime_Sama_8317:The reason mc never corrects them is because he wants to make them hate her and he believes or he is cursed, if he’s love that person that person dies like when he told 2 person in the past 1 of them died the very same day and when he told his aunt she got executed by his mother thinking she was tryna seduce.
1mth
onewhodreams
onewhodreamsLv2

yeaaah

Kagio:never ever am i gonna give a novel a chance again and just stick to the 20 chaps rule . so thanks author for destroying my limited time and thanks for being one of the reason why i hate trash novels and why i should not look at view count and a good villainess story.
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Noob6_writer9
Noob6_writer9Author

Hello, Author here. Here is my review of the story: Firstly, the core element of the story involves transmigration/reincarnation in a game world, with my own twists added to the narrative. Secondly, if you're reading the story, please take a moment to consider the MC's situation and conditions before criticizing either him or me. Thirdly, I will take my time in developing the harem, so don't expect immediate relationships. The first hundred chapters will focus less on romance. Fourthly, if you find the story unappealing within the first fifteen chapters, feel free to drop it. It may not be to your liking. That's all for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And yes, there will be no NTR or Yuri themes. Thanks for checking out the story. Peace.

7mth

Blessed_one
Blessed_oneLv3

i don't what to say about this novel, in first few chapter's i thought it's interesting but after that i think, this novel is f*cked up, author writing skills is good, but this novel 🤡. (sorry if this hurts anyone)

5mth
Sebimon
SebimonLv14

It’s from the same author of SOA, so you can expect a masterpiece. I only hope that the schedule of both novels don’t get affected.

8mth
Discarded
DiscardedLv4

the synopsis is very interesting but the actual story not so much. it's so convoluted and boring. the author trying to make star crossed lovers kind of story but it actually makes me cringe. it's not good fic but it's not awful either. just boring

7mth
Utkarsh_Saharkar
Utkarsh_SaharkarLv4

I don't know what to say. depressing mc just saying that he deserves to dire. confusing plot, just getting pain and hate by others with his own will. I don't want to read it anymore . Some people are saying that it's good, perfect but I don't feel like that. Harem tag but just pushing girls away from it and instead of starting again he is just stuck with his girlfriend like bro we know it hits hard but you have just given up in life. if you want to die alone just suicide again, you don't even want to use the new opportunity.

4mth
Ximnax
XimnaxLv14

Author how much longer is my boy going to suffer?! Will anybody find out about how he’s treated by his mother or the choices he’s forced to make? I NEED ANSWERS

6mth
Kenjihayamura
KenjihayamuraLv11

I haven't thought about writing a review since it's only 1 ch, but I'm pretty sure it's going to be great like Saga Of Atlantis. But author, will the update schedule for new novels be very long?I mean, SOA itself takes quite a long time to update, so............... You know

8mth
Ali_Ceyhun
Ali_CeyhunLv13

Bro... I have no words. This is masterpiece.

7mth
DEMONOID_GOD
DEMONOID_GODLv4

It already feels amazing and I don't know what the author have in his big brain for this story. Great start for the story author 😁

8mth
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