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Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv31yr
2023-08-20 13:24

I honestly liked the idea of ​​the story, but there are SO MUCH side character interactions that after 30 chapters I was sick of it. I wanted to give this 5 stars, but there are several things I didn't like even though I enjoyed reading the first half of the fanfic, a conscious system, I really hate them, they're like having a person standing in the middle of the movie screen while commenting out loud about the movie, it's really disgusting and annoying, Besides, the system is a loli, which is even worse, a Loli is literally a little-year-old girl, which is terribly illegal. The previous point bothered me a lot but there were also other things, for example the terribly slow pace and the forced plots, accompanied by the MC breaking the 4th wall to justify that the author is forcing the plot (when he fought the 2 beastmen, it was terribly obvious)I really don't know if it improves later but honestly I don't have the desire or strength to continue reading this. Giving the MC convenient abilities is also forced plot, just wanted to mention it

Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice

DogLickerGods
4.7
477 Chs

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Plan_C
Plan_CLv4

Ayooo loli system?

1yr
6
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Yeah, there are explicit descriptions of the Loli, honestly a Loli should be an adorable creature that is pleasant to caress, like a pet (I'm talking about the moe) but when they use a Loli in a way... you know what I mean, it's disgusting

Plan_C:Ayooo loli system?
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1yr
12
MikomiMirai
MikomiMiraiLv4

I agree with you on how annoying a conscious system can be especially if it isn't helpful to the host. It actually feels like Im' reading a chinese fanfic with how similar they are with story progression and on how the MC acts

1yr
16
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Obviously, they are underage children, they have nothing attractive and only sick people find pleasure in a Loli

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1yr
7
Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

Bro is roasting children with no fire 💀

Gabichu_Yeah:Obviously, they are underage children, they have nothing attractive and only sick people find pleasure in a Loli
1yr
4
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

haha im just kidding dude dont take the gif too literal.

Gabichu_Yeah:Obviously, they are underage children, they have nothing attractive and only sick people find pleasure in a Loli
9mth
fish_radar
fish_radarLv3

there are also constant pov changes with no warning, misgendering and tons of typos in general.

4mth
2
Other Reviews
DogLickerGods
DogLickerGodsAuthor

Let me summarize. This book leans more towards comedy and harems that are not too serious and not toxic. The MC can make his inner voice heard by the heroines and that unknowingly makes the heroines disgusted with the protagonists of their respective franchises and gradually favor the MC over the protagonists. And tadaa! MC gets a harem, cough. Sure there's action and ecchi here and there and please familiarize yourself with my unique writing style that might make you complain because my English is not so good.

1yr

LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3

It was good at the start, but mc became worse than the protagonist at the middle of the story. He think he is a mastermind but the truth is mc just a man child grey stu and all the heroine is really stupid AF

11mth
RealJoke_Pota
RealJoke_PotaLv4

It's good but I really hope this doesn't get dropped or anything.

1yr
Orsted_sama
Orsted_samaLv3

Oh, joy, another riveting critique from the connoisseur of mindless female leads! Because nothing says romance like falling in love as magically as your fanfics rely on inner voices. It's practically Shakespearean, if Shakespeare wrote about fanfiction. Your second fanfic was the shining star, with a dress-up darling leading the way, and then, you dropped it, Just like your mom dropped you when you were kid. Bravo! Your fanfics are like a thrilling rollercoaster of boredom, except for that one gem. Keep up the lazy work, and maybe, just maybe, consider injecting a dose of originality into your inner voice-infested tales.

10mth
Siqui
SiquiLv14

It's not a bad fanfic, but it gets tiring how repetitive and predictable it becomes with each passing chapter.

11mth
ahmmmm
ahmmmmLv4

Author, you are repeating the same idea in multiple novels. I believe it would be more effective to focus on one novel at a time until it is finished, before moving on to the next one.

1yr
I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv13

Pretty mid asf

11mth
mercurystarship
mercurystarshipLv2

Not really my style, but you might like it. I felt like I lost a few brain cells with each chapter I read, but hey, it's popular for a reason, right?

8mth
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I will keep my word. Someone who hates yuri in harem is definitely isn't my enemy. So I don't feel like to be harsh.But ya know. After mindset of mc got changed in chapter 103,im not gonna praise him.Let me explain his shift by a simple dialogs.-Look we have such a great girls around, why don't you seal the deal with them so we can see more of our beloved wifus?- don't have time, we have protagonist to cuck!-fair enough.That's how routine goes before 103 chapters.After?-so why do we waist so much time without doing anything? why don't you go and at least take girls that was already one step before Conquering?- I play hard to get and I don't need more girls, though I still waist time but I wouldn't do anything to them! isn't I am cool?!😐😐😐YES, HE BECAME HYPOCRITICAL HERBIVOUR PROTAGONIST HIMSELF.At least those ntr scenes was fun. but author dislike to write lewds and even that got taken from us.And now that's just a simple comedy novel... Very interesting, thank you....sigh.

11mth
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