Let me summarize. This book leans more towards comedy and harems that are not too serious and not toxic. The MC can make his inner voice heard by the heroines and that unknowingly makes the heroines disgusted with the protagonists of their respective franchises and gradually favor the MC over the protagonists. And tadaa! MC gets a harem, cough. Sure there's action and ecchi here and there and please familiarize yourself with my unique writing style that might make you complain because my English is not so good.

It was good at the start, but mc became worse than the protagonist at the middle of the story. He think he is a mastermind but the truth is mc just a man child grey stu and all the heroine is really stupid AF

I honestly liked the idea of ​​the story, but there are SO MUCH side character interactions that after 30 chapters I was sick of it. I wanted to give this 5 stars, but there are several things I didn't like even though I enjoyed reading the first half of the fanfic, a conscious system, I really hate them, they're like having a person standing in the middle of the movie screen while commenting out loud about the movie, it's really disgusting and annoying, Besides, the system is a loli, which is even worse, a Loli is literally a little-year-old girl, which is terribly illegal. The previous point bothered me a lot but there were also other things, for example the terribly slow pace and the forced plots, accompanied by the MC breaking the 4th wall to justify that the author is forcing the plot (when he fought the 2 beastmen, it was terribly obvious)I really don't know if it improves later but honestly I don't have the desire or strength to continue reading this. Giving the MC convenient abilities is also forced plot, just wanted to mention it

It's good but I really hope this doesn't get dropped or anything.

Oh, joy, another riveting critique from the connoisseur of mindless female leads! Because nothing says romance like falling in love as magically as your fanfics rely on inner voices. It's practically Shakespearean, if Shakespeare wrote about fanfiction. Your second fanfic was the shining star, with a dress-up darling leading the way, and then, you dropped it, Just like your mom dropped you when you were kid. Bravo! Your fanfics are like a thrilling rollercoaster of boredom, except for that one gem. Keep up the lazy work, and maybe, just maybe, consider injecting a dose of originality into your inner voice-infested tales.

It's not a bad fanfic, but it gets tiring how repetitive and predictable it becomes with each passing chapter.

Author, you are repeating the same idea in multiple novels. I believe it would be more effective to focus on one novel at a time until it is finished, before moving on to the next one.

Pretty mid asf

bloated cast of harem member, slow story repetitive story. green hat this green hat that getting boring. how about use the system to help the protagonist you like at least there's variations.