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LunaKindredLv31yr
2023-12-07 12:51

It was good at the start, but mc became worse than the protagonist at the middle of the story. He think he is a mastermind but the truth is mc just a man child grey stu and all the heroine is really stupid AF

Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice

DogLickerGods
4.7
596 Chs

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IreallylikereadingLv4

i never understood why some people like this kind of novel so much, with an mc who is always complaining like a chinese protagonist. im not saying you guys have bad taste or anything offensive at all, im just so confused?

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IreallylikereadingLv4

what do you expect from a guy who whines all the time to get some, hes literally like a child crying for his parents to get what he wants. manchild is a quite fitting description

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HellBoyMCLv13

lol true. At first I just enjoyed it while turning off my brain. But at some point to get heroines he started lying in his inner voice and the only difference between him and the protagonists are that he's the main character of this fic so every girl will d*ckride him. Him acting like some big brain mastermind and his system praising him as some mastermind always makes me laugh at how he acts like that despite having low Iq.

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UncleZhaoLv4

fellow daoist, if you would please recommend me some heavenly manuals where Mc is evil and his wife/women is also evil( single female lead ) and there should be romance. I would be grateful to you and will pray that you'll get reincarnated to any world you want with some wishes.

HellBoyMC:lol true. At first I just enjoyed it while turning off my brain. But at some point to get heroines he started lying in his inner voice and the only difference between him and the protagonists are that he's the main character of this fic so every girl will d*ckride him. Him acting like some big brain mastermind and his system praising him as some mastermind always makes me laugh at how he acts like that despite having low Iq.
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CTHULHU_YOGSOTHOTHLv4

Your novel Mc is a villain so is his wife: Supreme Couple In Apocalypse: Undead King & Demonic Queen

UncleZhao:fellow daoist, if you would please recommend me some heavenly manuals where Mc is evil and his wife/women is also evil( single female lead ) and there should be romance. I would be grateful to you and will pray that you'll get reincarnated to any world you want with some wishes.
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UncleZhaoLv4

Thanks for it, I read that a bit but it was harem.

CTHULHU_YOGSOTHOTH:Your novel Mc is a villain so is his wife: Supreme Couple In Apocalypse: Undead King & Demonic Queen
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DaoistZl1EGxLv14

marvel: godly lottery system might be something that would interest you then. Though *spoiler* the MC isn't evil from the start *end spoiler*.

UncleZhao:fellow daoist, if you would please recommend me some heavenly manuals where Mc is evil and his wife/women is also evil( single female lead ) and there should be romance. I would be grateful to you and will pray that you'll get reincarnated to any world you want with some wishes.
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UncleZhaoLv4

Though I have yet to walk the path of these novels, I, as a humble fellow Daoist, shall offer my prayers to the boundless Dao. To those who have shared their wisdom, may the Heavenly Dao favor you with reincarnation or transmigration into the realms of the stories you hold dear. May your journey continue in the worlds you love, fellow cultivators.

DaoistZl1EGx:marvel: godly lottery system might be something that would interest you then. Though *spoiler* the MC isn't evil from the start *end spoiler*.
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Bill_Smith_2424Lv3

Every Chinese fic is like that saying how racist America is towards Asians and when the mc starts speaking they say some out of pocket racist shit like it’s nothing

Ireallylikereading:i never understood why some people like this kind of novel so much, with an mc who is always complaining like a chinese protagonist. im not saying you guys have bad taste or anything offensive at all, im just so confused?
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RheizzLv14

naah that novel was pretty damn psychopath bro. pure evil. like he kills everyone without batting an eye. he kill everyone even a damn child who's innocent just to make him stronger. fu*k that novel bro.

DaoistZl1EGx:marvel: godly lottery system might be something that would interest you then. Though *spoiler* the MC isn't evil from the start *end spoiler*.
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DaoistZl1EGxLv14

Yeah the main character (MC) is pretty crazy, but the story seemed to have a good flow. The story seemed to fit Uncle Zhao's request so I thought I might recommend it. Though I have too admit it is a bit of a hit or miss recommendation. If you like the MC's personality, then you would likely enjoy the story. If you don't, then you'll likely would not enjoy it. I ended up dropping the story, but maybe someone else can enjoy it.

Rheizz:naah that novel was pretty damn psychopath bro. pure evil. like he kills everyone without batting an eye. he kill everyone even a damn child who's innocent just to make him stronger. fu*k that novel bro.
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DogLickerGodsAuthor

Let me summarize. This book leans more towards comedy and harems that are not too serious and not toxic. The MC can make his inner voice heard by the heroines and that unknowingly makes the heroines disgusted with the protagonists of their respective franchises and gradually favor the MC over the protagonists. And tadaa! MC gets a harem, cough. Sure there's action and ecchi here and there and please familiarize yourself with my unique writing style that might make you complain because my English is not so good.

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Gabichu_YeahLv3

I honestly liked the idea of ​​the story, but there are SO MUCH side character interactions that after 30 chapters I was sick of it. I wanted to give this 5 stars, but there are several things I didn't like even though I enjoyed reading the first half of the fanfic, a conscious system, I really hate them, they're like having a person standing in the middle of the movie screen while commenting out loud about the movie, it's really disgusting and annoying, Besides, the system is a loli, which is even worse, a Loli is literally a little-year-old girl, which is terribly illegal. The previous point bothered me a lot but there were also other things, for example the terribly slow pace and the forced plots, accompanied by the MC breaking the 4th wall to justify that the author is forcing the plot (when he fought the 2 beastmen, it was terribly obvious)I really don't know if it improves later but honestly I don't have the desire or strength to continue reading this. Giving the MC convenient abilities is also forced plot, just wanted to mention it

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RealJoke_PotaLv11

It's good but I really hope this doesn't get dropped or anything.

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Orsted_samaLv3

Oh, joy, another riveting critique from the connoisseur of mindless female leads! Because nothing says romance like falling in love as magically as your fanfics rely on inner voices. It's practically Shakespearean, if Shakespeare wrote about fanfiction. Your second fanfic was the shining star, with a dress-up darling leading the way, and then, you dropped it, Just like your mom dropped you when you were kid. Bravo! Your fanfics are like a thrilling rollercoaster of boredom, except for that one gem. Keep up the lazy work, and maybe, just maybe, consider injecting a dose of originality into your inner voice-infested tales.

1yr
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SiquiLv14

It's not a bad fanfic, but it gets tiring how repetitive and predictable it becomes with each passing chapter.

1yr
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ahmmmmLv4

Author, you are repeating the same idea in multiple novels. I believe it would be more effective to focus on one novel at a time until it is finished, before moving on to the next one.

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I_Love_HinaLv14

Pretty mid asf

1yr
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mercurystarshipLv2

Not really my style, but you might like it. I felt like I lost a few brain cells with each chapter I read, but hey, it's popular for a reason, right?

1yr
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Martial_PursuitLv4

bloated cast of harem member, slow story repetitive story. green hat this green hat that getting boring. how about use the system to help the protagonist you like at least there's variations.

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