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What? A Group Chat?

作者: Charlottes
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Blake a guy who has been betrayed by the person who he thought, his future yet she was nothing more than a selfish bitch. After being betrayed he caught a second stage cancer, and when he thought all hope was gone all of sudden he was invited to be the administrator of a multiversal Group Chat! Where he could interact with fictional characters! Group Chat Members (Currently) : Counter Guardian EMIYA (FGO) Jaune Arc (RWBY) Satan/Lucifer (Helltaker) Echidna (Re:Zero) Disclaimer: I do not own anything aside from my OC's

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Chapter 1Re:Boot

We all know that this story is crap, one of the reasons why I abandoned it. While it has it moments it's still crap honestly, it's forced and filled with teenage hormones atmosphere fanfic, like yeah I admit lol but that will change I will completely re: write the story forget everything cause everything will change this is not a reboot but an entirely different fanfic with the same concept 'group chat' of course, it's the main selling point.

I have a list of the group already after thinking who, this are the character list.

Leader : Dunno suggest me a name I'm not very creative in names, btw a male name.

Members : Counter EMIYA (Fate/Unlimited) He's cool, good at cooking, very helpful in missions like literally.

Jaune Arc (RWBY) My all time favorite male fictional character, too much potential but Monty fucking Oum just let em stay normal and I hate him for that.

Lucifer (Helltaker) She's pretty hot, has a thing for pancakes, can take care of politics, she's a smart cookie which makes sense, cause she was born from the very beginning.

Echidna (Re:Zero) I Originally intended it to be Minerva (Witch of Wrath) but due to her personality she wouldn't fit will in the story, as much as I love her she's just too nice, she doesn't care about who or what she's going to heal, she would do it regardless of the consequences, because she values life above anything else, she doesn't like it when she sees people dying in front of her, and that's the problem.

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I don't have a problem with writing overall it's nice a bit cliche here and there but which fanfic does not have one anyway? Story development is not really what i expected maybe the author is going for a more day-to-day kind of fanfic But one glaring issue i find is the Main Chacter Blake I don't know why the author introduced us to Blake gave him a tragic backstory only to see him make a comeback at the last moment only for everything to not matter because the story is about Jaune Yes You heard me right although there is a decent backstory to Blake he is nothing but a cardboard there to show boring he is in comparison it seems Jaune has been put in more work as a character we see him growing out of his childish naivete becoming stronger and actually facing his problems While Blake is in the background doing whatever i can't say i'm not disappointed in his development and i think i understand to a degree Author wanted MC to have a harem for some reason but interactions came out rather forced and abrupt For example Blake takes a sudden interest in this troubled school-girl and gets pushed away because of her trust issues you'd think he would give her some space and as an actual stranger mind his own business right? No.. He is like a chinese MC here fighting for the damsel in distress trying to get interested to participate in conversations with her why? Because he was interested As i have said too much focus on Jaune to less on Blake his part of the story has not been cultivated well or he himself has not been that he comes across as uninteresting forced and ingeniune in his intentions I don't see the point in making him the MC either way but it's not business Sadly i will be dropping this hopefully in the future Author learns from his mistakes and makes a better fanfic which we can all enjoy

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