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Akahime_Y
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2020-06-30 03:16

I am the exp of my sword Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood... I have created over a thousand useless review... Unknown to death, nor known to life... Have withstood pain to create many reviews... Yet, those hands will never hold anything... So, as i pray...Unlimited Exp Works!

What? A Group Chat?

Charlottes
4.7
83 Chs

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onion_ninja
onion_ninjaLv5

lol

2yr
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khofif_Maulana
khofif_MaulanaLv3

nice

2yr
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Shinigami777
Shinigami777Lv3

Full counter to this guy

1yr
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Trollface
TrollfaceLv1

and yet, the author repeats the mistakes of other idiots. WHY ADD AN ORIGINAL CHARACTER FROM THE ORDINARY WORLD WHEN YOU HAVE AN INTER-WORLD CHAT!? WHAT KIND OF IDIOCY!?

3yr

bondarant
bondarantLv2

I don't have a problem with writing overall it's nice a bit cliche here and there but which fanfic does not have one anyway? Story development is not really what i expected maybe the author is going for a more day-to-day kind of fanfic But one glaring issue i find is the Main Chacter Blake I don't know why the author introduced us to Blake gave him a tragic backstory only to see him make a comeback at the last moment only for everything to not matter because the story is about Jaune Yes You heard me right although there is a decent backstory to Blake he is nothing but a cardboard there to show boring he is in comparison it seems Jaune has been put in more work as a character we see him growing out of his childish naivete becoming stronger and actually facing his problems While Blake is in the background doing whatever i can't say i'm not disappointed in his development and i think i understand to a degree Author wanted MC to have a harem for some reason but interactions came out rather forced and abrupt For example Blake takes a sudden interest in this troubled school-girl and gets pushed away because of her trust issues you'd think he would give her some space and as an actual stranger mind his own business right? No.. He is like a chinese MC here fighting for the damsel in distress trying to get interested to participate in conversations with her why? Because he was interested As i have said too much focus on Jaune to less on Blake his part of the story has not been cultivated well or he himself has not been that he comes across as uninteresting forced and ingeniune in his intentions I don't see the point in making him the MC either way but it's not business Sadly i will be dropping this hopefully in the future Author learns from his mistakes and makes a better fanfic which we can all enjoy

2yr
_Pochitalover_
_Pochitalover_Lv2

Translated by Google sensei: All relatively good at first, but then it goes downhill in the Demon Slayer mission. The interaction between any character other than the protagonist or Jaune is good, but the main problem is with these two. Not only do I have to put up with the protagonist being in embarrassing and clichéd situations, but also, thanks to the author's fanboy, I have to put up with Jaune in even more embarrassing and clichéd situations. The author kills only both characters and the worst thing is that they are the ones who have the main role, not to mention that since this story is a semi-self-insertion, the protagonist lives sucking Jaune's p*nis. If you manage to ignore all that sorry spectacle, the story is decent, the author has to stop being such a fanboy and give these two characters more solid personalities.

2yr
Yorky_Man
Yorky_ManLv14

Read over twenty chapters and i have to kick myself for wasting my time on this garbage. kudos to the author for making an attempt at writing but.. honestly it's not working out.

2yr
Svir
SvirLv3

When will this update? Seriously........................................................................................................................................................

4yr
Fathir_Rezky
Fathir_RezkyLv1

I Dropped Reading This Novel, Because I Don't Like The Novel's Storyline with the Theme "Group Chat" and the members have MCs from other anime, actually the story is good but I found in this novel that the MC of this novel is not highlighted, in fact the one that stands out is the MC of RWBY and maybe the next one that stands out is Archer *disclaimer: This is just my own opinion so just ignore it

2yr
Dfransginola
DfransginolaLv5

Hi author, I'm your new fan. Nice to meet you 😆😆.

4yr
Im4x_sk1ll
Im4x_sk1llLv3

So I came from Fanfiction.net after seeing "picture of her" because this is a place that does have this function and that place doesn't. I really like the MC and he's unlike many other trashy edgy xianxia protagonist of this site. Also as soon as I remembered that you wrote Tadano and Delivery system I knew this would be good! As a Fellow Chat Group writer I know it's really difficult to manage many characters from different series because of character dynamics, power systems, scaling, etc. My only gripe with this ff is, why make OC's as the MC's heroines, when you can add many other beautiful, strong women from different series? I mean, it's your story, but honestly it's a waste of a fanfic IMO. BTW I'm Im4xsk1ll from FF.net, saying it just in case... Also, if it isn't any problem, can you review my fic? I'm thinking of rewriting the parts that I messed up and looking for different ideas to see what could I do to make it better....

2yr
ZerO_Life
ZerO_LifeLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr
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