One Piece : Adventure Ares

Just read the first chapter. You will know pretty much halfway through if it’s for you or not. Maybe it gets better after the first chapter but honestly could not stomach much more than what I read.

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Hi everyone, writer here. Well, I hope you guys like it. For those who don't like the story, well, don't read. There are still many good stories in webnovels. In addition, please respect the author. Try to create your own story. It's not easy to make a story even if it's a fanfiction. If indeed you are not satisfied, why don't you make your own story instead? Try you guys and make the story the most interesting until everyone says you are amazing.

The MC is just too OP. The MC literally has unlimited stamina among other things. I mean the MC literally wished to be in Foosha village which is literally the most cliche thing ever. Just unlimited stamina alone is very OP in the One Piece world. The author should've put a wish-fulfilment tag in this story. I'm really curious about stories like this. Why do you guys think having an OP thing like unlimited stamina is good for the story unless the story is gag which is the main thing people would bother reading/watching it. I suggest taking notes from HolyJokes. You don't have to make the MC very selfish but make it so that the things he get at least are entertaining than just giving OP things.

I like the novel. especially the world or the island provided for him. any negative point would be he became strong too fast but otherwise, it was enjoyable. there were some differences in speech patterns compared to the original like Garp constantly referring to himself as an old man. which got a bit annoying. the concept of the 9 kings was unique as well as them having an ability. continue going an amazing job author-san. I'll be cheering you on👍👍

A really well written story. I hope his decisions won’ t be influenced by his emotions of fanatism for the show. Make him more like Red the Aloof. It would be really interesting. And a moniker like The Lonely Emperor or the Eternal Monarch.👑🎉🎉

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I'm enjoying the story so far, other than some grammatical errors and word choices such as Sea Emperor (Yonko) that annoy me. The character is already overpowered, but that isn't necessarily bad. Not all stories need to revolve around the action. Plus there's the opportunity to observe the fights between other characters that the MC observes. Still too early to tell if the story will remain good, but the construction of characters and the writing skill of the author give me hope.

I like the concept keep it going 🔫🐻 .. .. .... .. .. ..., ..... ... ... .... . .. .... ... .... ...... .. .... ... ... ....... ... .. .. .

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