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Tyicius
TyiciusLv142yr
2022-05-17 08:44

I'm enjoying the story so far, other than some grammatical errors and word choices such as Sea Emperor (Yonko) that annoy me. The character is already overpowered, but that isn't necessarily bad. Not all stories need to revolve around the action. Plus there's the opportunity to observe the fights between other characters that the MC observes. Still too early to tell if the story will remain good, but the construction of characters and the writing skill of the author give me hope.

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