webnovel

Its a world of blending with group chat ( Rewrite )

漫画同人
連載 · 1.3M 流覽
  • 129 章
    內容
  • 4.6
    19 評分
  • NO.200+
    鼎力相助
摘要

Rewriting my previous novel

標籤
8 標籤
Chapter 1Chapter 1 : Prologue

"Damn this idiot protagonist!!" - A handsome young man with golden hair and blood-red eyes exclaimed as he stared at the manga in his hands - "Seriously, manga culture in this world is in continuous decline."

 

This young man was called Nifuji Akira, and he was the adopted son of the Nifuji family. He was the youngest son, as he had two older brothers: Nifuji Hirotaka, the eldest son in the Nifuji family, and Nifuji Naoya, the second eldest brother. Nifuji Akira was the third and youngest son in the family.

 

Although he did not share blood ties with the Nifuji family, Akira did not feel this way as he was treated very well as no one cared that he did not share the same blood with them.

 

As for his possession of golden hair and blood-red eyes, this is because he was a copy of the King of Heroes, Gilgamesh, as he became the inheritor of his power and appearance before he was incarnated in this world.

 

It is true that Akira was not a person from this world, but he was a person who was incarnated and obtained the power of Gilgamesh and a system in exchange for all the memories of his previous life, with the exception of his memories of anime, manga, and novels. Because his memories were not enough, the system was closed until he was 16 years old and he could not access it. Any of his jobs.

 

[Ding! Synchronization of THE FATED VILLAIN SYSTEAM With Houst has been completed.

 

"Finally!" - Akira couldn't help but shout with excitement as he had been waiting for this moment for a long time because this world was a mixture of different anime and that meant there were many protagonists to get points from.

 

In addition, this world was not just a slice-of-life world, as he saw many supernatural events in these sixteen years of his life in this world.

 

"System, show me my condition." - Akira ordered as he did not need to explain the functions of the system as he already knew them and was more interested in the power he had refined in these years since except for some abilities he had to train everything from scratch.

 

Host: Nifuji Akira

 

Age: 16

 

Gender: Male

 

Title: Heir of Hasegawa Clan, Heir of King of Heroes, Lord of luck, Favorite Disciple of Queen of the Land of Shadows

 

Race: High Human

 

Bloodline: Vampier (Not Awake)

 

Power: 15,000

 

Stamina: 15,000

 

Agility: 15,000

 

Intelligence: 20,000

 

Magic Value: 60000

 

Magic Power: 6000

 

Destiny Points: 1000

 

Fortune Value: ∞ (Dark)

 

Skills:

 

[ Gate of Babylon - Level: Max - Type: Active ]

 

[ Lust manipulation - Level: 69 - Type: Active ]

 

[ Weapon Master - Level: Max - Type: Passive ]

 

[ Golden Rule - Level: Max - Type: Passive ]

 

[ Superhuman Strength - Level: 20 - Type: Passive ]

 

[ Immense Durability - Level: 20 - Type: Passive ]

 

[ Immense Stamina - Level: 20 - Type: Passive ]

 

[ Immense Speed - Level: 20 - Type: Passive ]

 

[ Magic Resistance - Level: 20 - Type: Passive ]

 

[ clairvoyance - Level: Max - Type: Active&Passive ]

 

[ Cooking - Level: 51 - Type: Passive ]

 

[ Home Business - Level: 51 - Type: Passive ]

 

[basketball - Level: 35 - Type: Passive]

 

[ Acting - Level: 15 - Type: Passive%Active ]

 

"..." - Akira stared at his condition and honestly he didn't really know how strong his strength was compared to people from the supernatural world since except for his original family and his teacher he didn't mix with the supernatural world and was actively avoiding it since he didn't know if he would survive. Or he dies if he gets involved in the supernatural world.

 

As for his broken luck, Akira did not react much, as he knew his wonderful luck from his past life.

 

Knock!!

 

Knock!!

 

Knock!!

 

"Hmm, it must be Suna and Takeo." Akira hummed, getting up and going to the door while picking up his bag and putting on his shoes. "Good morning, Suna, Takeo."

 

"Morning, Akira" - Suna nodded to Akira and quickly noticed Akira's tired expression - "Did you stay up again watching anime and reading manga?"

 

"Good morning," Takeo said with a wide smile, "You don't have to do this, Akira, since today is our first day in high school."

 

"I know and I already regret this." Akira complained while walking with his friends.

 

The manga that Akira was reading was a cliched isekai story where the protagonist goes to another world and gets a harem, but after reading more than 100 chapters, the protagonist had never held a girl's hand, let alone kissed, and that's why Akira felt very upset, as he didn't like this thing.

 

"I don't know why you're still reading this kind of manga since the same thing always happens," said Suna, who was speechless because his childhood friend had been repeating the same mistake for a long time.

 

"Suna is right, you should read more shounen and fighting," Takeo added, as he is the type who likes fighting more than romance and harem.

 

"Okay, okay, let's go before we get late." Akira said helplessly, as he was already used to hearing these words from his friends, as this was not the first time they had this conversation.

 

Today was their first day as high school students, and their school wasn't just an ordinary high school. It was Suimei University of the Arts, a school specializing in developing talents. Although there were many people who had no talents, Akira and the others had succeeded. They were discovered by the school because of their talents, as Takeo had great talent in judo, Suna had great talent in scientific subjects, while Akira had physical abilities superior to his peers, in addition to high academic grades.

...

To get more chapters please visit my patreon

p@treon.com/Akasaki_Ryujin

or

ko-fi.com/akasaki_ryujin

你也許也喜歡
目錄
1

評分

  • 全部評分
  • 寫作品質
  • 更新穩定度
  • 故事發展
  • 人物形象設計
  • 世界背景
評論
點贊
最新
Sergiu_Chirita_3966
Sergiu_Chirita_3966Lv1

The fanfic isn’t bad—I like the main character and the characters that were introduced—but there are also significant flaws, namely the pacing. Everything happens too fast, and there’s a lack of detail. I don’t even know how to explain it, but each chapter covers just one day of the week, and far too little of what happened that day is actually shown. For example, when he removed Mai’s curse through massage, we only got a brief glimpse of their interaction in the first few minutes, and then it immediately skipped to the next day. We didn’t get to see the characters' thoughts, their interactions during the massage, or what happened afterward. Then there’s the situation with Mahiro and Mashiro—it showed them starting to talk after meeting for the first time, and then immediately skipped to the next day, where they were already inseparable. That doesn’t make sense. The author has too many ideas and tries to cram too many of them into a short timeframe. For example, the group chat—it was introduced, ignored for several chapters, then briefly mentioned again when he greeted everyone, only to be forgotten for multiple chapters afterward. Another small example: during a mission in another world, he told the characters that in his world, they were anime characters. I don’t mind this since it would be silly to hide it when they could just come to his world through the group chat and see for themselves. At the time, they even asked him to give them a copy of the anime so they’d know what to expect in the future and see what it was all about. But after the mission, this was never brought up again—as if he completely forgot about it. And for dozens of chapters afterward, the group chat itself wasn’t even mentioned. Small details like showing them their own anime are missing. For instance, he could have downloaded the anime on his phone and shared it with them, but such moments weren’t even hinted at. It would be great if the author could rewrite this fanfic, adding more details and deeper character interactions.

鼎力相助