I liked the previous one. let's hope this one will be as good or even than the previous one. You can have a meme.

The work is a complete mess of different worlds, there is not enough backstory or epilogue..................................................

if you drop this novel, I'm gonna find you and skin you alive

Really rough English with a lot of sentences that either contain oxymorons or just don’t make sense

this is a great book by a great author who will always leave you with more surprises and you just can't stop reading for more I do recommend this book😉👍

The fanfic isn’t bad—I like the main character and the characters that were introduced—but there are also significant flaws, namely the pacing. Everything happens too fast, and there’s a lack of detail. I don’t even know how to explain it, but each chapter covers just one day of the week, and far too little of what happened that day is actually shown. For example, when he removed Mai’s curse through massage, we only got a brief glimpse of their interaction in the first few minutes, and then it immediately skipped to the next day. We didn’t get to see the characters' thoughts, their interactions during the massage, or what happened afterward. Then there’s the situation with Mahiro and Mashiro—it showed them starting to talk after meeting for the first time, and then immediately skipped to the next day, where they were already inseparable. That doesn’t make sense. The author has too many ideas and tries to cram too many of them into a short timeframe. For example, the group chat—it was introduced, ignored for several chapters, then briefly mentioned again when he greeted everyone, only to be forgotten for multiple chapters afterward. Another small example: during a mission in another world, he told the characters that in his world, they were anime characters. I don’t mind this since it would be silly to hide it when they could just come to his world through the group chat and see for themselves. At the time, they even asked him to give them a copy of the anime so they’d know what to expect in the future and see what it was all about. But after the mission, this was never brought up again—as if he completely forgot about it. And for dozens of chapters afterward, the group chat itself wasn’t even mentioned. Small details like showing them their own anime are missing. For instance, he could have downloaded the anime on his phone and shared it with them, but such moments weren’t even hinted at. It would be great if the author could rewrite this fanfic, adding more details and deeper character interactions.

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en un inicio no te dan historia del protagonista, no se sabe cómo obtuvo sus poderes, como entreno, cual es su historia de fondo, nada el existe y punto. no conforme agregas otro reencarnación de otro personaje que es igual que el. el típico cliché de todas mías, amigo escribes bien pero no tienes historia. es irónico que sea una reescritura pero no mejora. suerte yo lo dejo.

I'm interested, I read the first chapters but I'm going to wait, it seems like it's going to be really good, but the few chapters make me really anxious, even more so since the release isn't scheduled.