Item: Its a world of blending with group chat ( Rewrite )
Rating: 2.8
Author: Xander_Paz

Xander_PazLv46mth

2024-10-29 03:28

en un inicio no te dan historia del protagonista, no se sabe cómo obtuvo sus poderes, como entreno, cual es su historia de fondo, nada el existe y punto. no conforme agregas otro reencarnación de otro personaje que es igual que el. el típico cliché de todas mías, amigo escribes bien pero no tienes historia. es irónico que sea una reescritura pero no mejora. suerte yo lo dejo.

Its a world of blending with group chat ( Rewrite )

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