Xander_Paz

Tiene demasiadas inconsistencias, los poderes no actúan como se explican. Se siente muy monótono y robótico todo, es mejor leerla con una mentalidad mediocre y sin esperar nada bueno

Buena weed

La historia es buena, pero no se tiene que tomar muy enserio es una historia muy ligera sin profundizar mucho en nada creo que puede ser mejor pero me basta... Saludos sigue con el buen trabajo

lol

This is not for everyone, the author leaves some facts but the story focuses on the MC and his own growth. I think it's good to pass the time and turn off your brain for a while. I give it a 7/10

no sé qué decirte amigo creo que la historia se siente en caída pero fue bueno cuando duro

It is one of the best novels I have ever read, it is very funny and has its touches of clichés without ceasing to be entertaining. A gem, traducción Google traductor

the main character is very confusing, or the author didn't know how to give substance to the mc's personality. apart from the typical cliché of I meet the heroine and then it's time to fuck, I think one chapter of r18 is fine, but 3 or 5 chapters in a row. be a little ashamed, friend, I think if you feel like turning off your brain, this is for you.

wow that was pretty accurate, that's where the discomfort I felt when reading the novel came from, I think they took the alternate universe too seriously, the story doesn't show much development of the canon, only the occasional mention, for the advice you write about relationships you don't think you apply it, friend I know it's difficult to try to improve the character just like that, I don't know what problems you had when you wrote this or how you're doing in life in general or in love but the romance with Grayfia feels very bland it gave me some cringe but I think you invested too much in the demonic society that you loosened up on the rest.