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It Started With Devils & Artefacts

作者: Dragon15681
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WARNING: I write my fanfics from a phone and on move. So, there will be some spelling mistakes, plus English is not my native language. Though I have an editor this time so, it should be better. Chapter every Monday, Wednesday, Friday until it catches up with chapters in Discord SYNOPSIS: A genius inventor dies and wakes up in his younger self-body... Only that it wasn't truly his younger self, more like an alternative younger self from reality where supernatural is real. To make it even better he finds out that someone decided that he is the successor to Solomon and now he has powers to enslave devils... It's time to cause some worldwide chaos from one's garage! Tags: Neutral-Evil Mc (enslavement, selfish Mc), Harem (obviously), Inventions, tech progress, Sacred Gear creation, AU DxD universe (part of Dragon's Omniverse) This fanfic is a STEAMROLLER with the main focus being Mc progress and his technologies and how it affects the world around it. So, if you want drama, suspense, epic battles for no reason, this one is not it. Prologue 2k words, regular chapters 5k words ~~~ For advanced chapters (+5 chapters, 25k words) my pat: pat reon.com/DragonsFics OR Discord: discord.gg/denoffanfics ~~~ P.S.: I do weekly voting on Patreon if you want more chapters for this fic (or other fics ) vote there.

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Valorant_343
Valorant_343Lv14
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

When I like some novel, I tend to write some fast reviews. To write another with how story proggresed, because that's kind of important. See if story whould make it even better. Unfortunately, that's not exactly the case. There is some very obvious problems. Some minor, some... Might be pretty big. And first of all - yes, a villain tag doesn't work... At all. Probably the most useless tag in this God forsaken place. Oh well. The most glaring problem - it's not dxd story. Not because it's doesn't "follow Canon". But because there is just too little dxd elements in it. It's more like isekai with some dxd girls. And because of this, magic seems to be a lot less intresting. First of all, because it's a tool that we spend a lot time to discuss but have no use. And second, because author just use some very basic ideas, like electro - magnetic induction and somehow magic energy actually follow them... Yeah,no. If magic acts just like another energy, then it's shouldn't be called "magic". That's kind of important, ya know. Either way. I just hope it's whould proggresed at least to some kind of plot. Because right now, it's just a bunch of useless "wish-fulfillment" magic theories with a little bit of girls. But without any kind of story behind it. There is literally nothing more then a guy that summon chicks - that he doesn't need, to do more things - that doesn't have meaning... Not exactly a story, ya know. But, the grammar is fine and autor seems to have at least ideas-so, I kinda believe that later it becomes better. Or not. I tend to believe in a lot of nonsense lately.

Toxic_Goku_gaming
Toxic_Goku_gamingLv2
Ryuuou_29
Ryuuou_29Lv5
literl010
literl010Lv1

The writing quality is very good, with diverse word selection and near flawless grammar and spelling. However, I can't say I'm a fan, still I won't give it less than 4 as I believe that's a fair rating, taking into account my own tastes. My main problem is there isn't really any overarching plot, nor does the protagonist have any real goals beyond inventing stuff. This is fine if you just want a simple, easy going fic, but I was hoping for something more. There's no kingdom building, business building, world takeover, battles, rivals, etc. The protagonist is one of the strongest beings in the world, yet spends his entire time just working on tech that he doesn't really need, nor does he really use it beyond testing if it functions. The cycle is pretty much: get idea, make idea, show off idea to girls, go back to step 1, repeat ad infinitum. I have seen some reviews compare the protagonist to Tony Stark, and I agree with that, if Tony never actually used his inventions in any meaningful way. In over 100,000 words there have been 2 incredibly brief steamrolls and that's it. The girls are well written with their own distinct personalities, wants, and desires. Though I'd have liked some more balance, as when a new girl gets summoned there rest seem to get mostly relegated. Adult scenes are well written and aren't cringe inducing like many WN fics, they're well dispersed and spaced, with some nice variation too. Overall, it depends what you want in a fic. Well written slice of life, with an easy going plot and no real goals? This is for you.

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