I'm just another run-of-the-mill guy in this big and beautiful, but repressive world. So, I'm curious to know what you found in me for you to stalk my account, Stalker-san.
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I'm confused. Why does he train Sasuke? Does Sasuke have any relevance to the story?
Author-san, why'd you suddenly stop updating this on discord😭?
Is this him now? Nothing really changed from the OG except the clothes.
*𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬'𝘴 𝘤𝘰𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘴*
Lol. So you'd rather have her used than conquer her now?
That's sus👀.
This is my subjective review of this fan fiction. Writing Quality - 5/5: The grammar and how the author narrates things is great, no conspicuous flaws here. Story Development - 3/5: It's slow. The story development is being held back because of the constant filler chapters the author does. Character Design - 4/5: Even though the MC is a slave, it's understandable. Louise is pretty much his creator so his actions are acceptable. Updating Stability - 3/5: A chapter every day? That's dope! BUT again, because the majority of the chapters are fillers, I won't rate it 5 stars. I think I'd rather have 3k words a chapter every 2 days rather than 1500 words every day for it to be a worthless filler. World Background - 4/5: Nothing's changed.
That was a good filler chapter😊. Thanks!