Charly_MadSon

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A gem among so much mediocrity, don't miss it!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

A fanfic with a good idea but a somewhat unsatisfactory development, I'm not referring to the writing, but to something that most writers fail at, the world building, in this fic it feels deficient, almost as if it had no ideas for the development and ran towards the canon events to avoid thinking about this and only alter what it wants, in the same way in my opinion if you are going to introduce new characters give them more than one chapter to get to know them better, after all if you kill someone and make it dramatic, you don't feel a connection and even less some sadness for someone you've only known in a few lines, explore more the fact that he began to live with the group even years before the events, how this can change the group and the repercussions of it and don't just jump in time to the part that suits you, I hope these things don't stop you, keep trying, you have a great writing base and good ideas.

I must say that it is a decent work, a somewhat slow but stable pace, a new way of character development and timeline, the only thing I hate is Elenalise's new state (I didn't like her state in the original work either) but acceptable In everything else, I hope for more chapters.

Is it just me? or is this a damn summary of the same game? I played Vice City many times, why do I want a summary or a book about it?[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

This is really good, if you read it you won't regret it, my only question is? This has romance (don't judge me) I think it's the only thing this story lacks to be even more incredible.

A good fanfic with a promising future, I won't say more, to avoid spoilers, read it you won't regret it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I'll be honest, I've been looking for a good oshi no ko fanfic, but most of them don't seem to understand the characters correctly and when they express their own vision the character is lost (in this case ruby/aqua/ai's relationship with the MC) and this fanfic is no exception. On the other hand, the author seems to be guided more by his own musical tastes, which he includes in an incongruous way. (starts singing in English and then switches to Korean) Keep it in Japanese!!! If he is successful in his musical career he will obviously evolve to sing in English... It may sound harsh, but it is true, this fanfic has good writing, but it seems to lose coherence with each chapter, I hope it is fixed, because the basic idea is fantastic.

good start, but the song he sings disappoints me a little, in my opinion there is no type of agreement with what he wants to reflect, there could be better songs that better correlate the feelings or emotions of the concert. On the other hand, is he supposed to also speak Korean or is it just the magic of the script? How does that song sound in Japanese? does anyone know?

I'm surprised that this FF doesn't have a better rating, definitely something you should read, although some of the powers seem exaggerated, they are not blatantly abused like in some other works. Totally recommended, I hope for more chapters.