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lemme give this the 10th review! I miss this story damn it!! hurry up and come back ma' man!!! I need a dose of good Yu Gi Oh! Fanfic with good(massacres) duels, badass MC, with hot chicks as his girls (Alexis, Jade, Akiza)
it's not a younger/older than you look thing, her devil fruit control time/age, she basically aged her body and made herself look mature, when she's actually a 12 years old kid. her devil fruit powers was shown in many occasions, she could age or de-age anyone she touch, (turning herself or others to younger or older versions), so age wise, she's 12, but since her devil fruit control age, she made herself adult.
exactly what I said, you just changed Soul King to Reio, those are the parts that were severed from his body, hands, and heart, some say even the brain and think that Grimmy is the brain of the Reio. but so far only Mimihagi, Perinda, and Gerard are confirmed as Reio body parts.
she's prego with Erza
I will be honest, I feel like Lucian and Thalia click more than Lucian and Annabeth, if this was early phase of the story I'd suggest leaving Annabeth for Percy and keep Lucian and Thalia, kinda like two ironic relationship taking in consider their parents animosity (Zeus and Hades, then Athena and Poseidon). just personal opinion. besides Lucian already got the three fates, and somehow you squeezed in Artemis although I felt Hestia was more appropriate and wouldn't have any negative effect (like Artemis giving up being Goddess of Chastity, unlike Hestia who was chaste by choice and not related to any divinity or ideal)
so says Erwin Smith!
and I'm not reading, but you got to stop begging others to keep reading.
you can't convince anyone when you pull that kind of stunt man, if you wanted readers to keep reading you have to make it entertaining and worthwhile, not a bad plot that makes them want to drop and start begging them to keep reading. you either make it entertaining and get readers, or stuff it with a bad plot and start begging readers to not abandon it; and quite honestly I don't even know what were you thinking when you made that up, like that sounds like one of the most forced plots if I've ever seen one.