Flashy Adventurer System : Show Off to Get Stronger!

Hello! Author here supporting my work with a 5-star rating XD This is my second novel and I've learned a lot from writing my first one. I've applied all of my learnings in this one and I'm confident that this work will definitely be worth your time! The story is great and will only improve as time goes by. I've got some crazy things planned for this novel so if this work of mine is right up your alley, please give it a try! Thank you in advance <3

Feels like more of a Shounen Fantasy with Adventurers. Slight Spoilers ahead. So I've read a bit more than 200 chapters now, which felt like going through 2 or 3 books, and I can honestly say it's enjoyable. If you chose this book based on the title like me, you know what you were getting into. Someone who doesn't hide their powers and probably gets benefits related to it. Well, if you thought like that, then you'd be correct. Shye, a not so shy little kid, gets a system from a transmigrator of all things. It's neat The Flashy Adventurer System. The more people are in awe of him, the more points he gets. I won't get into the specifics, but it's a nice system compared to the bazillion of system novels out there. If I had to list one negative that irks me, it would be that the MC is more of a shounen protagonist than someone who is an overpowered protagonist despite having that overpowered tag. I know it's complete subjective, but when your MC is struggling, fighting his peers only to win miraculously it gives me shounen vibes. Again, that's a personal preference. Don't let that bug you too much. It's still a good novel. Just be aware that the MC is a teenager who still has much to learn. He will make mistakes and act a bit stupid, but just remember he wasn't that educated compared to others, and hopefully, you'll be good. Score: 8.2 out of 10 Personal Score 8.3 out of 10

Can't believe this only has 14 Reviews! It deserves more! Btw, I read till ch 250 till now... All I have got is praise for this novel if you can exclude the rough beginning. Given the author is a newbie, they surprise us with the improvement in writing and the story! Except the somewhat stupid MC at the beginning and a bit of no-romance romance, everything is good!! It delivers what is promises! A flashy adventure! Faceslapping! Tons of faceslapping!!!!

simply review from me–op and decent mc. has many young master- syndrome. good story. not so good action scene's because author just wrote *PAH* *PAH* *PAH* and some movements thus make us bored. if author fixe this then i think it will make this novel improve a lot.

This here is your tenth review. Means your story finally has a rating- in my eyes, that's a cause for celebration! No matter how small the step, a step is a step! -That guy who's been here from the beginning

It’s a bloody good book, pick it up and enjoy 100 chapters in and I love it

So far I quite like this book. The story is fun and the system is interesting. However, these chapters quickly became riddled with lustful scenes even though the students are underage. The reasons for these inappropriate scenes are stupid and shallow. A few of these intereactions were almost pedophilic. If you are going to have scenes like this at least bother to make the characters 18, because this is just wrong, and I can’t justifiably let it go no matter how much I enjoy the book otherwise. Aside from this glaring issue, the book has been lovely so far. And although I could not reccomend this book because it goes against my moral values, I recognize that the author does have skill and seems to value the feedback of the readers. I will check back in for another update when I have read more.

Is there a physical version please ? I want to buy it

it's good just one or two problems, like the rank,level,stats. in the tournament his opponent was strong , how strong? what is the difference between them?... what is level for? what will happen if he level up?? like it's really useless or not needed is the novel...and the stats, like when you add 1 stat to strength how much does it add?like how strong? and every 10 stats the price of stats will increase by 20, so what is the difference between 10,20,30,40 and so on stats number?... and lastly the name of the mc.. like shye? how do i read that? shey?she?gay? it's quite confusing to read if you're a fast reader sometimes you'll mistake it as "she"... that's all 5⭐👍✨✨🌟

Very enjoyable. There are only two things that I think could be better first the chapters are too short and second the world building could be better but the rest is really good 9,2/10.

I am amaze how your story was build, the characters and well developed.

This book is great! Shye is a great character- and his backstory is awesome! Everything is pretty good, but there are some spots where the punctuation isn't the greatest, but a good book overall! : D

Loving it so far could be a little better in chapter lengths and but more detailed in world building

I haven't read it yet and my review rating might change later, but this looks really interesting and so does your other story. I have put both in my library to check out later when I have time. I love MC's that show off instead of hiding their power.

I like this story, the system's backstory is a bit shaky but its still believable, and the system itself is very interesting. The world building needs a bit of improvement though.

Love the novel so far, as every thing looks good whether the story or the character. Waiting for more chapters ,keep it up.

8 chapters in, I genuinely enjoy the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s really good and I took a liking in Shye, she is a well written character. Recomend 10/10!

What a good concept :) I've read a few system novels and this one got all of the things I want! Good job author! keep going! [img=recommend]

Here are some things you can improve on : - Every characters seems so simple minded. There is literally no diversity in character personalities. Everybody seems to suffer young master syndrome - You should add more lore to the story. Your descriptions are too simple. While the quality we readers may search is not necessarily here, reading this book is worth a while and it keeps us constantly interested. I am looking forward to this novel and the others you may write in the future.

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