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Wait here a minute!! His parents pokemon died right!! While defending a town from a horde. So, it doesn't directly apply to his close ones right! So, his friends family can be killed for example! As long as it wont tramatize MC. But so if a friend risks his life to avenge his family! Then MC will. e forced right?! RIGHT!!!
Then shouldn't there a limit? Thats too op!! Am i seriously gonna have to make a fanfic of your fanfic if i want a bit of tragerty?! But where do I get the time for that!! I was gonna spend my vacation after finals improving my coding skills but duck that i guess!! Like i seriously want a scene where he takes out all his pokemon in a life and death struggle!! I am begging you! Think about the disappointment of my asian parents!!
This story has amazing potential but i have reached almost chapter 300 at the end of academy arc. There are 2 big cons in the story thou: 1) You give full status screen updates for all pokemon like even those that are not even important for every small thing like a move reaching a new level of matery. There are dozens we dont remember all that. So why not just show there status fully before fight? Also why do you give more updates for pokemon which will be like his third team but we get rarely updates of MC? Like every 50 chapters only. 2) MC never faces the threat of death even now? Like missions are fast paced for even other novels? Like a few chapters for missions? What i really want is a scene of MC fighting a horde to protect a city etc! Because that is his speciality with his own army. I don't get it? You have so much foreshadowing of how this world is not peaceful! Where it seems towns are commonly destroyed. But MC has never expirenced something like that himself.
no prablem man. thanks for the heads up!
the last two? seriously!
Like make a history or backstory for this centipede.
What do mean refusing to evolve?
With his chi manipulation he can become the greatest lighting bender now.
But ackermans can't become titan shifters right? So, you can just put that as a system initialization reward. Like it purifies his bodies from impurities or somthing. Because MC will already be peak human athletes as a ackerman. But considering he levels up and he says his combat prowess increases significantly per level up like in chapter 2 i think? Then won't he reach obviously superhuman levels! Because if the level up reward is too small then why care about it? If even at level 30 you only get 50% more stats than other ackermans!
How did MC at level 0 already be able to do 150 laps? Like he was superhuman before the rewards from first mission even if he was in this world for a few days. Also, having 50% to 60% more than the average person stats is not that insane! Still human levels!! Probably world class athlete level body tho he doesn't have the skills right? So why are even titan shifters shiting there pants? Also shouldn't ackermans like Levi and makisa have above 100 in each stat?