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BalsamicThunThighs
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2024-04-03 12:27

Feels like more of a Shounen Fantasy with Adventurers. Slight Spoilers ahead. So I've read a bit more than 200 chapters now, which felt like going through 2 or 3 books, and I can honestly say it's enjoyable. If you chose this book based on the title like me, you know what you were getting into. Someone who doesn't hide their powers and probably gets benefits related to it. Well, if you thought like that, then you'd be correct. Shye, a not so shy little kid, gets a system from a transmigrator of all things. It's neat The Flashy Adventurer System. The more people are in awe of him, the more points he gets. I won't get into the specifics, but it's a nice system compared to the bazillion of system novels out there. If I had to list one negative that irks me, it would be that the MC is more of a shounen protagonist than someone who is an overpowered protagonist despite having that overpowered tag. I know it's complete subjective, but when your MC is struggling, fighting his peers only to win miraculously it gives me shounen vibes. Again, that's a personal preference. Don't let that bug you too much. It's still a good novel. Just be aware that the MC is a teenager who still has much to learn. He will make mistakes and act a bit stupid, but just remember he wasn't that educated compared to others, and hopefully, you'll be good. Score: 8.2 out of 10 Personal Score 8.3 out of 10

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Meowder
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Thank you for the honest review, brother! I always read your comments and learn alot. I shall incorporate my learnings in the future chapters. again, thank you for trying my book out ❤️

BalsamicThunThighs
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Your doing great. Also if my comments sounds negative just know it wasn't my intention lol

Meowder:Thank you for the honest review, brother! I always read your comments and learn alot. I shall incorporate my learnings in the future chapters. again, thank you for trying my book out ❤️
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