DanMachi: Ascension of the White Emperor

I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍 I know it isn't perfect and may contain some grammatical errors but please do enjoy. 🙂👍

Honestly I wasn't planning on writing a review, but Author-San requested us to write reviews if we like the book. Currently, I'm very invested in this book. The story is great, I can't wait for new chapters, for me the chapters aren't long enough because I just want to read more. Don't get me wrong, I'm not rating this as 5 just because the Author, I really do think this book is a great book so far. Don't give up, don't let the people who give you bad reviews get to you. You won't be able to please everybody, but you don't have to. Just continue doing what you feel is right for your story and your plot. It is your story. If those who don't like it want something different, they can go find a different book somewhere else that suits their tastes better. No need to be such a downer and make another great novel be dropped because of their own interests getting in the way. Keep it up Author! You're doing great!

Good start of the story and can't wait to see what path he'll take with the system at later levels. Hopefully he gets with Loki I haven't seen many fanfics have her in it and I feel she is a good choice due to her divinity and him being an emperor.I can't wait to see how strong and see if he just dominates the gods at one point then traveling to a new world this book has alot of potential!! Can't wait for more.

if you wanna read about a beta Mc who listen to his sugar momma, this novel is for you! ...... .... ...................... ....... .....

***Review AS of chapter 4*** The Idea isnt New but has its own unique Spin which i Like. And to be honest when did i ever have a MC that didn't Know about His world. Very rarely so have a cute Ais author.

the writing is good and all, but his backstory is really bad... he died because he was cheated on by his girlfriend with the rich man and the henchmen killed him, really? truck-kun was more original. and this goddess who looks more like a teenager? I can't read beyond cap 5, in the moral (in my language, this sentence makes sense because I'm using the translator to write)...

Mc Background done alright, lots of Fanfics where mc good karma and given rewards for karma. very common but this is one of the few fanfics where effort was actually done for the background of Mc there is also the transition from mc death to reincarnation, usually it goes Here are your wishes then goodbye. But you actually made the ROB a goddess and a lover, it's not new but not the same old boring Take your wishes and leave. still 5 chaps so thats all I can talk about as for this FanFic to become a multiverse it is very likely so Author should be careful in which content to add in this fanfic cuz multiverse types are likely to get tiring in the long run, tho if you enjoy what you will write then it might be fine.

Updates are a bit slow, but everyone has their personal life so np, good quality as well look forward to seeing more in the future. Good luck author👍

*sigh* we need more . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Good story, I liked the mc and the goddess ... Although there are sadder and more miserable backstories, of which the goddess could have been surprised, it was passable ... The only thing that complicates me so far (ch. 4) , It is the lack of chapters xD .... I want to continue reading: (!!! But I will be supporting this novel and hoping that you do not abandon it, as most authors do on this page xD ...

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I like this story its a nice and simply slice of life like novel with anime elements that i really enjoy for a casual read that has enough acrion to keep me interested and anticipate the story development.

its a good story not the best but definately worth reading a seeing where it goes and the writing is improving over time i dont usually write reveiws but auther asked and i thought whatever why not

Awesome story.The starting and the consecutive progreesion upto date is very good though the interaction with the story characters are quite lacking(as he just arrived at orario).Hope MC has some nice interaction with the girls in future along with some action. Thank you.

yo keep up the good work I love reading this fic I'm not a very descriptive person so all I can say is don't drop this and keep up the good work

-Ascension of the white emperor. -literally wish-fulfillment with goddess being his doting wife and wipping his *hmm*. Well, that's might be how emperor of the past was raised... Irony? I don't know, but what I know is that is an absolute clcihe work. With all those things like "first death battle" and all of that. Yeah, sure.

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It's been long time since i wrote review, well i just want to say if you really liked something you must continue what you're doing, idk what to say to review but the star rating is my honest review *cough*

Good fanfic novel. it's an interesting read and if I may add my personal request onto this novel... well, I think it needs faster pacing of the story to progress because it seems too slow (in my opinion...). Also, the chapter release! Pls make it at least 5-7 chps per week, keke

This fanfic is awesome!!!! Please try to release chapters on Daily basis. If not at least try to release 2 Or 3 days. And keep up the good work. Q-1- when will MC arrived in city?? And please make MC join freya familia it will make story interesting.