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RayanArcadia
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2024-09-04 04:00

Okay let's get this done with. Firstly, I would like to say that I would recommend this novel for others to read. This novel has both good and annoying parts. There's a lot of depth to the Female characters (why am I not surprised) while there is also depth on some of the guys (only some but yeah it does exist). One thing I at least appreciate is that the novel also focuses on Oliver, who's mc's friend. It's almost as if he's a second main character of the novel which makes things interesting. The writing quality is good and while there are occasional grammatical errors, they're obviously present in every novel. The story progression is where things get a bit annoying though. While I do appreciate the fact that mc gets stronger fast, it clearly is not enough. Not to mention, his mother is a very annoying character. Mc literally becomes a dog in front of her. While the reason is justified, it's just plain annoying to see mc's interactions with his mother where he only grovels and gets beaten and tortured up for no reason each time. It's shown that his mother is a very cold and rational person who will do anything to achieve her goals. Then why does she somehow seem to be a sad*st who loves torturing the mc. She wants to use mc as her tool but she just keeps on damaging and permanently scarring his body which lowers his worth. Like does she have brain damage? Also, while the princess is fine, that girl named Shayamal is also annoying (not as much as the mother though). Other than her and the random guys showing up to kill mc every 3 chapters for no apparent reason, other characters like the main FL and Oliver are interesting characters. The interactions between the characters are often funny and lighten the mood which is a plus point. The World Background is ever-expanding as we get to know more about Akasha which is supposedly quite vast and different from the Empire mc is currently in. Overall, I'd rate this around 4-4.1/5 and would recommend you guys to read this. Cause clearly you're interested in this novel, hence the reason you read this long a** review till the end.

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