MARVEL: GODSPEED

the starting was actually really good and captivating. However around the time where Duke couldnt stop that RPG is when i dropped it. You're telling me, Duke, running at Mach 3(at least 2.2kmph) like it's a walk on a sunday morning, isnt able to move fast enough to either save his family, or redirect the RPG(only 600mph)??? and in later chapters the author goes "its plot hole deal with it". There's another word for it, and that's lazy writing. you shpuld just pick a different character other than flash to write, the flash is just one of those superheroes that are just super OP that it makes being superhero look like child's play. So unless his antagonist is another speedster, hard for him to not overpower his enemies, unless it's "plot armour or plot hole"

The writing is decent and the start is seem interesting but is actually future events that is instantly a negative, and the protagonist is super smart that knows everything but his life, current situation and goals are not interesting or well executed, instead of realistic events and world introduction the plot turns into high intensity fights and missions.

Gonna wait till it reaches 20 chapters so 👍👍👍👍

Its the author here and Im giving myself 4.8 stars. Not bad right?

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I'm about to read it i can't take it anymore one time i had this idea to but not the speed force the MC has the power of death flash and i dropped it cause i don't have more information about death flash i am pretty exited reading this fan fic please author don't drop this

Nice! I like how you've made the speedforce and the Phoenix force part of a family. I think it makes sense, and serves justice to how nerfed the Flash was in DC. Good luck with the story, author-sama!

GS dude keep this story going the way u have it don't let anyone talk yo our of it this is the best Speedster book i've found! And i hope Nat is the love interest lol....

It started great ngl! One of the best starts to a fic i have ever seen HOWEVER! The author has proven that he is willing to comepletely screw over the MC for “plot” Instead of steadily getting stronger the MC’s powers go crazy and nearly kill him for absolutely no reason, KOing him and allowing the author to basically shove him into being Sheilds lapdog.

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So are not continuing ur jujustu kaisen fanfic? 😰😰

English not my language - i read and write with autotransplantation. Writing Quality 4 - coz i cant say wrong or write. Updating Stability 3- this book only 3 day in my library and cant mark it better Story Development 1 - start and idea of ff - great. But so many holes on the plot... Sory i can't mark ZERO. Character Design - mc is bs. He chnge his mind from nothing. world background - too many holes. Bruce banner - knew about speedforce, but dont about stones. Stark and oscorp make particle accelerators ... Noone from them - can't do this coz' oscorp - biopharmaceutical, and stark not in this branch of science. If it make otto octavius would be better. Author give mc speedforce and give it nerf already after few chapter. (Yeah i can't say about rpg) When mc go for help - stark make costume with VIBRANIUM.... When they stop tesserakt - create blackhole.... After loki kill all family just take his hand.... Go to 616.... Just drop. Too many bs for me.

nothing to say ....just perfect i cant imagine my day without this gem🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

All STAR for the entertaining story. Hope that Bro. Author will keep doing the greatness as all his other stories. BANZAI to the interesting & OMOSHIROI stories!

I'll keep writing this because I like this but really you've got to either download Grammarly or just learn to put your paragraphs in half because smaller paragraphs are just better to read and look at.

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