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Xiphos_Gladius_032 days agoCommentedI'm not sure about yin-yang, but he definitely didn't master time-space
- Xiphos_Gladius_035 days agoCommented
Why not use the dark side?
- Xiphos_Gladius_038 days agoReplied to Pino_3
I don't think he's weak; it's just that the MC is too OP in one-on-one combat. Plus, Kagami didn't use his mangekyou sharingan which I'm pretty sure he has.
- Xiphos_Gladius_038 days agoCommented
What a monster
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- Xiphos_Gladius_0322 days agoPosted
After reading the other reviews, I came to the understanding that grammer was an issue, which was only further cemented when I read your first chapter. I recommend you using grammerly to fix the grammatical errors, and you can inturn learn from the mistakes the tool points out to you. Best of fortunes to you!
- Xiphos_Gladius_03a month agoCommented
Maybe be rewind time by 30 seconds? Sort of like the forbidden jutsu of the uchiha. It would make sense since he was reborn 3 times
- Xiphos_Gladius_03a month agoPosted
This is fire! I like how the MC's power is still not fully clear to us, but I hope it will be made explicit in the future. _________________________
- Xiphos_Gladius_03a month agoCommented