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Marvel: Abstract entity

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Cover made by: Jhassi discord: https://discord.gg/YTwU6P4sn7 Description: Mc is originally from a possible future 2050 of our world where human beings were not able to commit to stopping climate change, he was chosen by an omnipotent being that MC likes to refer to as ×÷+- because of some reason. ×÷+- granted MC's 3 wishes and in exchange, he had to be transmigrated to a world of ×÷+-'s choice. Mc thought it was Dceu because he got reincarnated there but that was only because of the influence of the wishes he asked for and he had yet to be transmigrated to the real universe that ×÷+- chose for him. PS: As you may already guess from the title of the fiction, this book is a little bit influenced by my feelings towards maths which will be observed in MC's feelings towards ×÷+-. Just for fun at the start. trying my hand at writing something for the first time, I don't own dc-comics and marvel comics. Though I'm writing this fiction before that, I have to confess that im not that knowledgeable about MCU, just a fan of it so don't expect it to be completely accurate. update rate depends on my mood so there's that too and English is not my first language so I thought I should inform you about that too. thnx for reading until now.

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จำนวน 0 :Auxiliary Volume
จำนวน 1 :Introduction to past and present
จำนวน 2 :The first ripple in the ocean
จำนวน 3 :Calm before the storm

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Bland is the best way to summarize this ff for me. I read up to 26 chaps and soo far nothing interesting has happened. The ff isn't terrible but it ain't good as well. The most notable issues i had were: 1. The english is sometimes good sometimes bad like 1 min i understand everything then comes a paragraph that makes me go "????" 2. When i read that it would start Dc then be Marvel i expected the mc to actually interact with dc world longer then go to marvel like a multiverse ff but it felt like the dc part was mostly filler that can be summarized into 3 chaps probably, especially since it felt like the reason Dc world was used was just to arm the mc with knowledge and fighting skills b4 dumping him in marvel. 3. The interactions between mc and the characters wasn't really the best. To me he felt like an emotionless doll from age 1-9 when he interacted with his brother, when he grew up more it was ok since he showed more emotions especially to kara but when he went to marvel it felt like mc suddenly became a mix of an edgy/autistic/loner when he interacted with tania especially since it's just another cliché damsel about to be r*p*d. 4. There was nothing to hook/make me want to read more, no epic fight scenes, nothing at all. It's just a slice of life of an mc learning,eating,creating,etc... 5. The Mc's 3rd wish which is 220 IQ (which is used to learn things quicker if i remember correctly) like sure this is author's choice but wow is it a waste of a wish. TLDR: I don't hate the ff but i don't like it either it's just bland and doesn't have anything wanting me to keep reading more

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