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GABRIEL_Ferr
GABRIEL_FerrLv33yr
2021-12-26 13:58

Essa história tem um potencial imensurável, se o autor tiver tempo, saude, a história se tornara algo grande. Sobre o futuro romance do protagonista, sinceramente, eu espero que tenha um harém, mais claro, caso não tenha uma entrada para esse harém (2 a 4 mulheres), a IA tera um potencial para ser sua única parceira romântica, por favor querido autor/ autora espero que vc construa essa história com a maior paciência possivel......😊 Boa sorte🤙(caso você va ler esse comentário, ele esta em português - Brazil)

Marvel: Abstract entity

Kitshaar
3.9
83 Chs

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GABRIEL_Ferr
GABRIEL_FerrLv3

Mais uma coisa, tente nos mostrar mais o cotidiano do MC depois da calamidade,

3yr
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Kitshaar
KitshaarAuthor

sorry, it took a little time translating it. first of all, why did you mention that it's Portuguese from Brazil? I can read it then I should already know what language it is right? I was a little confused there. Now, thanks for writing the review, I need these as without them I can't get ratings so I appreciate that you used your precious time in writing it. Moving on to the content, let me be honest with you. I'm a new writer as you must have already figured out by now and the thing I learned after reading a lot of harem fiction is that you need a lot of experience and talent to make a harem successful and sadly I don't think im that capable right now. Another point is that MCU females are not like Dxd females that can easily be supportive of sharing their love interest with someone else so it doesn't make sense if I make this a harem. I hope you understand where im coming from. And last but not least, don't worry. We will be with kar-el as he travels and try to find a place for himself in MCU so there will be a lot of interactions

GABRIEL_Ferr:Mais uma coisa, tente nos mostrar mais o cotidiano do MC depois da calamidade,
3yr
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Kutay1661
Kutay1661Lv3

who is love interest? i know you cant go harem but he will love someone right? i personally love in dc wonder woman or supergirl or harley quinn and in marvel scarlet witch or lady death or susan storm(maybe) and 1 girl but i forget now which girl whatever this is my harem list(just dc and marvel)

Kitshaar:sorry, it took a little time translating it. first of all, why did you mention that it's Portuguese from Brazil? I can read it then I should already know what language it is right? I was a little confused there. Now, thanks for writing the review, I need these as without them I can't get ratings so I appreciate that you used your precious time in writing it. Moving on to the content, let me be honest with you. I'm a new writer as you must have already figured out by now and the thing I learned after reading a lot of harem fiction is that you need a lot of experience and talent to make a harem successful and sadly I don't think im that capable right now. Another point is that MCU females are not like Dxd females that can easily be supportive of sharing their love interest with someone else so it doesn't make sense if I make this a harem. I hope you understand where im coming from. And last but not least, don't worry. We will be with kar-el as he travels and try to find a place for himself in MCU so there will be a lot of interactions
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